Yeah, reading your story and i feel like i want every character in that world to die, didn't mean i hate the story though, in fact i enjoy it alot in my twisted sense of humor, i dont know what funny seeing adult abusing 9 years-old kid but i enjoy it, maybe am just losing my mind after reading too much bloodborne fic(but if i have to take shirou place and endure Raven abusing or join a hunter dream to kill beasts and mad hunters in Yharnam, i will take on Yharnam with a heartbeat.)

So, thank you!

The fight is amazing

This is an awesome fic and I am blown away by how good it is. I hope your planning to update soon

need moar
good story MOAR

"Omake" is a cringy word. I don't understand why people use it.

Necesito el capítulo 18 y que continúes como esta serie, me estoy volviendo loco sin otro capítulo, se que puede que no tengas tiempo de escribir pero al menos me gustaría una actualización para saber que vas a continuar con la historia

damn Qrow

That's good. VeryveryveryveryGOOOOD

"I promise, I will never leave you, my little rose."
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Omfgimcrying(((((

yuck, the shirou with the tribe plot is pretty toxic. he's like the lonely girl in the tower... needs someone to come save him... not really enjoying his time with raven as a reader, but I can see how his selflessness is easily abused by raven. doubt it'll happen but I kinda want shirou to kill raven and wreck her tribe... meh thats probably what you're going for tho

You’re a great writer thank you for writing

I ain’t givin any sh t,that was fuckin dope! I loved it! Plus he can trace the wielders skills so it’s not really impossible

Magus killer extraordinaire here! Yaaaas!

Good for jaune

Pyrrha v shirou! Yeeesssss