Reviews for The First Hunter |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent writing. Wonderful mystery surrounding Oz and Gehrman with a refreshing comradery. The kiddoes are adoreable. You made Gehrman very likable. "I'm old and just don't give a shit anymore" immediately followed by "Glenda looks stressed and tired. I'll make things easier for her". Gazing wistfully at Summer and Tiang's relationship. The old blood-covered hunter awkwardly patting the kids' heads then retreating from the room. Really sets him up a decent guy who has been socially isolated for a loooong time. Wait until they seem him fight though... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fascinating first chapter. Excellent hook. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope one day you return to this story also it’s really good too |
![]() ![]() ![]() I didn't think I'd enjoy a story about Gehrman but damn if this ain't good shit. Too bad it seems to be dead. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man, I hope you continue this story. Gehrman is such an interesting character. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice |
![]() ![]() ![]() dam this is great could you please update |
![]() ![]() ![]() buena la cosa muy interesante, are you alive or are you more deaththan teh fandom of twd? is really good what you create here, pleeeeeeeeeeease continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() My heart just absolutely cannot handle this story, it is too damn good at plucking heartstrings! |
![]() ![]() I am no longer asking: update this fanfic |
![]() ![]() ![]() it's nearly been a year, you updating this shit or not |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bro im begging, I know your still active, so please bring this back, pretty please |
![]() ![]() ![]() I do hope you continue this eventually author |
![]() ![]() Please update this amazing story! I beg you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() porque literal en una parte aparece la palabra "masturbarse"? |