Reviews for A Young Girl's Delinquency Record |
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firemaster101 chapter 10 . 2/16/2021 Hmmmm I think theirs a innuendo some where in the chapter lol |
firemaster101 chapter 8 . 2/16/2021 Wow this fic has more twist and turns than I was expecting |
Grig9700 chapter 35 . 2/16/2021 It is so good to see this back! Aaaah I was worried it'd be put on hiatus and then wabam! New chapter, seriously fantastic work (I will admit that a part of my worry was chance that the only place I know where I can ship Erya and Marry might have ended. So seriously, thank you!) I do hope you have a magical day, because oh buy was mine thanks to you~ |
unseenw0lf chapter 35 . 2/13/2021 Glad to see this story again. |
Conna McCanna chapter 35 . 2/12/2021 you are still a magnificent bastard. I love how you write them! |
UnkownSoul chapter 35 . 2/12/2021 I did not expect to see this updated again, but I am happy it was! Damm things are picking up again! So much different points converging once more! |
Generic Guardsman chapter 35 . 2/12/2021 Glad this story is alive. |
BrotherCaptainSheperd chapter 35 . 2/11/2021 AN UPDATE! THANK YOU! |
Itachidono chapter 35 . 2/11/2021 Oh hell yea! Anytime I see an update for this it just makes my whole freaking week. You've got a talent for making business machinations terribly interesting keep up the great work and hope to read more soon! |
animusand chapter 9 . 2/11/2021 Reading this a second (3rd?) time, I am still greatly amused by Tanya's, "That was one time!" |
matze3 chapter 35 . 2/11/2021 First thx for continuing the story. Already feared this story's dead like so many other good stories. Now second the review: Not quite sure what to think about it. Grammar and so on is good however content wise... It's unlikely she'll make a deal with Gulbenk before talking with Mustafa Pasha and then she'll know about the storm that's coming from him and the oil exploration companies. Anyway the aerial mages she has are mostly turkmen(ish?) so it's unlikely they'd support the seperatists and that is a kick to Gulbenk and his plans. The aerial mages make a violent uprising of the nomads in that region very hard if not impossible to sustain. Especially without aerial mages support and for such a risky move the situation is still far too tense. It would be far to bold atm. Maybe if Tanya was less a by the letter of the law woman and send some aerial mages to support the uprising. But now with trained aerial mages on the turkmen side the cost benefit scale changed completly. With Tanya on the governments side? It won't be a battle but a slaughter |
Legion of Clouds chapter 35 . 2/11/2021 So Turkmen civil war? Anyway, continue posting please. |
Asasyn13 chapter 35 . 2/11/2021 It's nice that this story hasn't died. Thanks for the update. |
Crimson fist 99 chapter 35 . 2/11/2021 Nice to see some of the 203rd getting the spotlight in this chapter, glad to see this story being updated! |
Lupin'sLuckyLibrary chapter 35 . 2/11/2021 Uh, police? I think that someone has been doing some necromancy around my area. Yeah, uh, his name's Gremlin Jack. Uh huh, thank you. Have a good day as well. Oh no, she thinks about Visha. Truly, a problem that requires the brightest of minds to solve. |