You did a great job with the characters and the pacing of the story.

Hope you continue this story.

Heavily impressed with the authenticity of characters paired with your expressive voice. You excel at getting into the headspace of the characters and pacing these interactions and scenes competently. You show vastly more than you tell, and enter and exit before intrigue is lost. These are all indicators that you knocked this shit out of the park, and I have to agree. Love the story and how it’s told. (Kinda a review for ch 1- 24 so far)

A Young Woman's political record has wrapped up recently leaving Delinquency Record as the last man standing, I hope we'll see many more updates in the future. Tanyas Story is a good one!

finished reading this all the chapters so far in one long sitting and its really good, looking forward to the next chapter

just going to throw the idea out there how about trying make a Naruto/Youjo Senki crossover where a smarter, darker, highly skilled/trained post 4th war Naruto get sent to the world of Youjo Senki becoming a member of the 203 (or at least working for Tanya), pairing with Visha

A excellent and original AU. Thank you for writing this story

Please continue.

Please continue I am looking forward to more.

this is a dumb idea but if she could her hands on a scientist that is determand and a dozen other ones they might be able to make synthetic spider silk but it would take years to make but in the long run she could have armor stronger than kevlar, use it in medicen and wev it into sheets stronger than steel plus she can say it's bio degradable as a sales pitch to any of those environmentalist but it would cost clost to a million or a few 100,000 considering the time and the deprestion(by the looks of it hasn't gotten too bad) to get resolts and agein years so she will have to wait until she has the money or get some kind of backing they might be able to shorten the time by using magic and then using enhancement magic on it(in the form of armor) to make it stronger than before they would have to invent the technology which sounds impossible but then again we have things that shouldn’t exist yet but now do plus flying people that can level buildings

I have not read yet, just the TV trope page but why is she called the butcher of arene? She didn't order it and the 203rd didn't kill any civilian only enemy mages.

Lots of fun moving parts that I can't wait till they come to a head

Question for Author: Is the Archive of our version "Adult version" as you call it, have more content or lore? than here in ? and when you say adult version do you mean that literally?(*cough* Detailed Elya x Barrow nightly escapades *cough*) or is it just something Archive of our own requires you to tag this story on there as?

I know that her father is dead but is her mother dead to? If not will they look for her to see is Tanya has any inherited brain disease or was that not a thing back in that time?

Would it be possible for Tanya to gain an ally’s in the US because as far as I can see the US is sort of neutral in all this and it would give Interpol some new obstacles but not an open alliance of course but with a few patriotic ones that only care about restoring the country and would like her help in doing so. If she does do this she might get funding for her research teams and sell it and share the profits even if it was small it would show that she is capable of new ideas and after showing that Lahr knows what she is doing she might suggest that there might be a second war coming (based of what is going on will happen in a few years although I don’t know when) not right away but when signs become clear that war is closing and unavoidable and before it happens or after Tanya can suggest some new weapons that they can manufacture or training troops/mages for a considerable fee of course but I don’t know if any of what I said is possible and I don’t want to suggest things that won’t go with the story and if it doesn’t that’s ok because I love the flow of the story and it’s development so take your time because it’s worth the wait

Read all of this in two days. It was even more fun than 'A Young Woman's political carreer'. This had way more adventure and. . . well glorious madness is the best way i can discribe it.

Not sure if you plan to continue this or not, since it has been a while since you updated, but thanks for writing this mush regardless.

Watch this "Nigerian Prince" scam turn out to be legit. It would be perfectly in line with Tanya's luck to date.