Reviews for A Young Girl's Delinquency Record |
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Taryth chapter 13 . 1/22/2022 Im very confused on why Tanya still has plans to train areial mages. Sure she excels at mage combat, but its what got her into so much trouble in the first place. With her knowledge, she should be able to take her current assets and invest into some sort of tech company, and start rolling out gradual advancments. Cut any relation to combat, and just build an identity as a CEO. No one would be able to track her illusions, and eventually she would grow unrecognizable from a 12 year olds photo. |
Guest chapter 35 . 1/3/2022 this is so good and I really want to see where this goes next. it's really cool just seeing her take over the world in such a creative way. does it lead to a WW2 or does she just create a corporate empire? love the characters as well as the various arcs on different continents. |
ndabdm chapter 10 . 12/16/2021 So THAT’S what the point of the mask is… |
Fleija chapter 35 . 12/9/2021 It's been 10 months, do you own Youjo Senki yet? Terrific fic, binged it in a day. Looking forward to more. Very immersive. |
Maiden Soliloquy chapter 35 . 11/9/2021 Thanks for all the chapters so far! I've had this on my backlog for a while but never got to it, shame I haven't read it sooner! It's a great work, hope to see more chapters in the future. Very interesting to see what Tanya does, really feels like it's something that she'd really do or he I guess? Confusing sometimes. |
Toransin21 chapter 35 . 10/9/2021 Absolutely love this story. Looking forward to the next update. |
cassnova5424 chapter 13 . 10/4/2021 id have gone for Jen E. just for the pun factor |
Twisted Stigma chapter 21 . 10/1/2021 The fucking Riddick reference here, holy shit, I love it. "I'm going to kill you. With my teacup." |
NikoNamura chapter 9 . 8/21/2021 Don't know if this will ever be read, but I'd like to first thank the author. This story is quite enchanting and feels very believable to what the characters and states would act like, the opposite of what some do and just twist a story setting into something less favorable. I have no experience writing a story, but I'd like to think that the years I've spent reading all sorts of mediums hold some sense of reliability. Once again, thank you and back to reading, this is getting good. |
CosmicCreature chapter 35 . 8/17/2021 fuck this is so good! all the pieces are moving and the tension is building up and up into what will be a massively blindsided tanya moment when she realizes this old guy is actually planning a civil war! |
Qriiz chapter 15 . 8/17/2021 Hm, I'm seeing a beginning of Hotel Moscow from Black Lagoon. |
Qriiz chapter 3 . 8/16/2021 Urgh, dont do such a thing please, the set-up is just as important, background story is what make or break characterization. At the very least, dont say it outright you dont like some part of your own story. Better edit that author note. |
Guest chapter 35 . 7/31/2021 Has Tanya considered looking into investing in penicillin research? Because I don’t know if it has been invited yet and that sounds profitable |
Guest chapter 35 . 7/26/2021 I’m just wondering that if the states ask Tanya for help will there be a conspiracy? Like Interpol won’t know and only be a need to know or something |
Thaddius chapter 35 . 7/11/2021 I think a funny final scene for this fic would be Tanya on a talk show. talking about all her enterprises as an old woman. reminiscing about all her accomplishments, aliases, and everything on national television. talking about the sheer amount of good her actions caused. then... dropping that illusion. IT IS I THE DEVIL OF THE RHINE! or something. Just... super old. like 110 or something. having outlived her enemies. and lived long enough that even the world thinks she is dead. and Jennifer Ecks is not Tanya |