Reviews for A Young Girl's Delinquency Record |
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ThatRabidPotato chapter 31 . 2/23/2021 Although I am extremely displeased with the inevitable Tanya-Visha ship (why is it necessary?), I will say that I maintain hope that she ends up back in the Empire to stay eventually. It's where she belongs. |
ThatRabidPotato chapter 12 . 2/22/2021 I was rolling on the floor when Tanya talked with the Mayor. Oh, she has no idea how much of a hole she dug for herself with that one, and it's completely in character for her. Again, very impressed with this so far. |
ThatRabidPotato chapter 11 . 2/22/2021 Tanya just can't help but excel, can she? I saw this coming the moment she started that firm. Whatever she does, she's going to be the best at... and the best will always draw attention. Very well written story, so far. |
ThatRabidPotato chapter 9 . 2/22/2021 Does this mean that Tanya isn't going to need to disguise herself around Lena? Interesting... |
ThatRabidPotato chapter 8 . 2/22/2021 The irony behind Tanya saying you don't take bullets for friends... isn't that exactly what she did for Weiss? Interesting that now she has to deal with becoming a physical woman. No longer just a young girl. |
ThatRabidPotato chapter 7 . 2/22/2021 Tanya is completely believable here. This is how she would think and act, or at least it's a valid interpretation of it. Well done, even if any outcome other than her being publicly and permanently lauded as the Imperial national heroine she indisputably is doesn't sit well with me. And Mary Sue finally shows up. I was wondering if she would. Curious to see if you'll handle her as well as you've handled Tanya... |
ThatRabidPotato chapter 5 . 2/22/2021 Just started reading this, and it may be too late given how many chapters there are, but I really hope you're not intending on having a Tanya/Visha romance. There's already about a million of those on here. |
randomuser855 chapter 20 . 2/19/2021 Oh well...I thought Tanya would get a free shipment of type 97s but it seems like it didn't reach her. Shame. Would have been nice if Tanya got her hands on the dual orbs and not only made use of it herself but began mass producing but shamelessly copying how it works. |
AbsoluteSilence chapter 1 . 2/17/2021 Just wanted to say that i love the chemistry between your characters and the story so far is absolutely hilarious. Pls keep it up. |
Guest chapter 35 . 2/17/2021 Amazing fic as always! |
randomuser855 chapter 19 . 2/17/2021 Well, it looks like there's a free shipment of Elenium 97s on the way. |
firemaster101 chapter 29 . 2/17/2021 Visha is clever as hell lol. |
firemaster101 chapter 23 . 2/17/2021 Yesssssss |
firemaster101 chapter 22 . 2/17/2021 Huh very good chapter ! It shows that tanya still has a few thing that she'll abhor . |
firemaster101 chapter 11 . 2/16/2021 I feel like this is kind of. A stretch maybe mention being x influence or something |