Reviews for Shooting Star
Debbie Hicks chapter 27 . 7/13
2w8. Epilogue 2 B-Pov then Bitten aliens/Vulcans /rest of aliens/Vulcans god guilty as treason and murder who is as freak blacking out so he good See jailed Broken us our Whole mind with bitten best friends feeding on people more ass all of then kept for as all of many years broke our souls and minds' Erased were minds of children good more third Destroyed us/them the Cullens good you die with them tore Freely Beheaded rm here the damages to our minds was fresh Blew up was not living vanished had PSTSD Good tore both brought with her/him with others had kids finally their punishment death then Phaser blasting hordes with theirs finally broken them as all of them see dead beheaded from here then Lost as all of blood supply two were next good with three/witnesses see this turfn illegally Victoria/two/others lied of hybrids nuked last Thren Ashes/dirt dust myself struggled so he/them Alice Carlisle they done to us/them gasp help us we can't control our gods/goddesses gasp- hunting as all of all of animals More monstrous as all of it chained you lie of more members Beheaded then tore brain stumps with young ones good bring them Good then it happen Nothingness as left of us/them were not living see revealed the secret and With freaks imprinted illegally then With them Blew Vampires stolen lives/memories good as al of them blown up with them then it happened loss of them Burn the each criminals they must die now by us/all of them, good then it happened never was mortal to as all of state animals were as all of them Drained as all to solve a animal crisis nuked from husks from around the world then Nothingness bring them poisoned see this Not Guilty as charged take their heads then Screaming good with as all of their as all of allies/both with both newest witnesses overdosed good hordes vanished met mates see this loss of it then it came young animal grew up orphaned myself was born with pointed ears was with finely slanted eyebrows gasp they caused it Alice chill out she's not human so them gasp three know they did her daughter mated with Jake is a young parent so their kids had kids gasp the illness is the Pon 'Farr a Biologically need to mate had eight children is a hybrid successfully so them had powers myself a Young-looking Grandmother held the garnet time rod in robes flowing traditional but ceremonial oh my god they never are mortals they are Immortals what is this elegant long slivery staff my weapon my husband I am the Matriarch high-ranking eldest ruler of Gol heading ruling heiress scion mistress the estates of Surak gasp crap it's on the planet Vulcan hair in four formed a bun longer so hers the robes was rebooted but upgraded rumors of us/them were aboard with things were as all to remains of them then were ferrying to Vulcan start newest lives/memories frozen solid nuked with them, With both Vanished good deceased see this lost but banished freely are exiled on Vulcan but these ones they are gone vampires were nuked vanished see this never made it good Drained of blood last of human blood bitten freely good vanished freely train them there brainwashed them, good then it's as all of years later with months as well so dates now remembered them again twice was not mortals.
aditichat13 chapter 27 . 6/17
loved it
PurpleRain27 chapter 27 . 4/7
Great story, thank you.
reader71360 chapter 27 . 3/23
Thank you for writing this story. I am relieved that Jacob is dead. Did his mental health decline start when he ran out in front of Angela? Maybe it started sooner and that was the reason he ran in front of her.
reader71360 chapter 1 . 3/22
I'm sorry to hear about Angela, but Ben married her anyway.
debb lavoie chapter 27 . 3/14
I enjoyed this story. Love how jacob was handled and how Charlie was as well.
debb lavoie chapter 26 . 3/14
I love how you wrote that scene.
debb lavoie chapter 24 . 3/14
Wow poor Charlie having to kill Jacob. So happy the babies are healthy.
debb lavoie chapter 23 . 3/14
Charlie is so funny.
debb lavoie chapter 21 . 3/14
Much better proposal.
debb lavoie chapter 15 . 3/14
Seth is a good wolf, glad he resisted.
debb lavoie chapter 12 . 3/14
Such an ato burn their favorite place. He's gone off the deep end.
debb lavoie chapter 5 . 3/13
No I don't blame Edward, it was a stupid mistake.
debb lavoie chapter 3 . 3/13
Oh jeeze who is at the door.
debb lavoie chapter 2 . 3/13
Sad that she lost all of them when Edward left.
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