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Guest chapter 24 . 7/16 Did someone watch Charlie as he was in shock and it can be dangerous |
Guest chapter 23 . 7/16 Great. They are gonna need Sue. |
Guest chapter 22 . 7/16 Garrett and Kate? |
Guest chapter 14 . 7/15 Will Sam be able to save the pack? Paul and Rachel? Can Carlisle help Jared? |
Debbie Hicks chapter 27 . 6/28 28. Epilogue 2. Bella's Pov good Turned them Imprisoned them then too late now pets drink from both the wit we died Asd all cursed them finally there experimenting/augmenting more than the whole sedated freely less more these not humans see Accused off aliens/Vulcans myself was serving time in Servitude good tore with them the vanished then Attacking was broken than too late bitten Best friends/young ones the was sickest frailest but chalky but ghastly good Pain the my screaming then Goodf punished for lifer so them to Freely Nothingness Freed of brought there good wiped out from here the two found her ill but dying freely but with him/ them good nuking last but blasting Freely Alice they ben used up but were forced them who done to you bot them with them their guards gasp Chaind ours tore Nothingness blew up cursed to Walk on Earth brought there see this died there with freaks finally then Atomizing but suddenly had streaks of red with black gasp then Piercing freely to witness/ the threw with wives then too late was no longer there smashed fled senses gone brought there good newest addictions not anymore died there blew up see this Non-humans blew up they see lifeless see Irina/others die now then send as E-Mail that she with them are summoned here good sentenced to death to them good without souls/memories blasting freely then Nothingness' was left blasting heads-stumps viciously as all of them torn freely As all of Vampires vanished freely Alice they framed us/ them gasp they done acts too late never was alive hunting as all of animals then as all of more monstrously too late were Chained gotcha sentenced death three tore Fled freely No longer there lost blew freely then brought there finally ended them they are Punished then Ashes/dirt/dust blew Vampires ass all of them good five/ each /more monstrously From here as all of them blew as all of them good were guilty as charged see these criminals never was alive blew up With witnesses nuked freely Smashed freely good they are forbidden to live then suddenly too late was no longer mortals heads-Stumps by finally from first death is triggering immortality not anymore burn these ones see them accused of them then removed Freely was no longer alive with freaks imprinted what not there it happened cast out from parents/tribe gasp they are not accused from here good then then it was loss of them never was mortals were not humans was too late ass all of it suddenly couldn't be killed/destroyed vanished freely so them/five/four's vanished finally remover to the dining room then too late with Immortal children then With them then loss of it good ripped loose Vampires vanished so them good wiped Fresh what not there good then it caused Earth on lockdown ritual us/ them ere cursed beings walking freely a chain reaction it was COVID-19 Had a planetary ability to shift time-space as well gasp what are we listen three years go by it is now let's see Then too late go on we are with her is a revolutionary gasp it is with your abilities two powers according by Star Trek's Star date Twenty-two eighty-five look down Starfleet uniforms of Star Trek 3 the Search for Spock gasp the 23rd century oh my god Sir! yes, wake up oh no but turned white as a sheet he swallowed nerves was a young Frightened Vulcan male madam how formal you wear he paled of Paul's lean but hard muscles Stacey was very beautiful was flirting was really seductive did a wild dance like one from a screen blaring from a track could dance like one used my pheromones but spoken in Orion made Strom go in lust then a clanging Bound so me acting like an Orion animal woman so them Jessica was a skilled dancer improving her skills what your dance exotic. |
LillianBroderick chapter 16 . 2/2 Edward is so fickle |
JD Thorn chapter 27 . 11/16/2023 Wonderful! Very well done! Absolutely LOVED it. |
laura lou who chapter 27 . 10/18/2023 Had to read this story again. So good! |
aditichat13 chapter 27 . 6/17/2023 loved it |
PurpleRain27 chapter 27 . 4/7/2023 Great story, thank you. |
reader71360 chapter 27 . 3/23/2023 Thank you for writing this story. I am relieved that Jacob is dead. Did his mental health decline start when he ran out in front of Angela? Maybe it started sooner and that was the reason he ran in front of her. |
reader71360 chapter 1 . 3/22/2023 I'm sorry to hear about Angela, but Ben married her anyway. |
debb lavoie chapter 27 . 3/14/2023 I enjoyed this story. Love how jacob was handled and how Charlie was as well. |
debb lavoie chapter 26 . 3/14/2023 I love how you wrote that scene. |
debb lavoie chapter 24 . 3/14/2023 Wow poor Charlie having to kill Jacob. So happy the babies are healthy. |