| Reviews for Shooting Star |
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   shannon30033 chapter 26 . 4/29/2020 Ah, the wedding night. So much better than the book. It would make sense that she would be the one to set the pace. Nicely written. |
| shannon30033 chapter 25 . 4/29/2020 Thanks! Loved the chapter. |
| Midnight Cougar chapter 27 . 4/25/2020 Loved how you added Renesmee, much better. Lol I really enjoyed this story—excellent Bella, and the canon was wonderful and presented so well. Thank you for a great read. |
| Midnight Cougar chapter 26 . 4/25/2020 That was a beautiful honeymoon scene. |
| sue1zide chapter 27 . 4/22/2020 I was wondering if they would have a child. I still can't stand that name though. |
| Kayozm chapter 27 . 4/21/2020 I’m glad you added Renesmee. As you said, she fits. Plus after going through a pregnancy with Angela and Ben’s babies it seems only right she gets her own as well. Lovely ending. I enjoyed thus story very much. Hope you are keeping well and safe in these weird and scary times. Thanks for sharing your creativity with us. |
| Kayozm chapter 25 . 4/21/2020 Also, how’s your home schooling going? Are you still in the New England area? I’m in Australia so very different, plus our kids are on school holidays now anyway (till the end of the week), but I think this is our 5th week of staying at home... which I quite like, but the girls feel if they’re going to have to go back to doing school next week, it’d be nice to be AT school so they could see their friends. |
| Kayozm chapter 25 . 4/21/2020 Definitely convenient for them that easygoing Seth is now the alpha! Poor Charlie, that’s a lot to come to terms with, regardless of the fact that Jake was about to attack them when he shot him. |
| Kayozm chapter 23 . 4/21/2020 Ha! Yeah, that’s a different way for Jacob to spill the beans to Charlie, lol. |
| Kayozm chapter 21 . 4/21/2020 Yes, a much better job, if a little cocky! |
| Kayozm chapter 18 . 4/21/2020 I think Rose’s explanation was fine. She did her best. Would Edward have let himself get stuck in that takeaway? Probably not. But then he might have got them all in trouble! Of course J deserves a chance, but I have a feeling he won’t take it. And with him being a fatally strong supernatural creature, that makes it a little tricky. |
| majose chapter 27 . 4/20/2020 Seriously. Had Edward been human, we would probably have died of stress |
| Kayozm chapter 17 . 4/20/2020 So where is Rose? I notice Emmett didn’t answer the question? I’m a bit worried. |
| sonogal chapter 27 . 4/20/2020 Great ending. |
| Kayozm chapter 15 . 4/20/2020 You’re right, I definitely did not see that coming! |