Reviews for The Dragon and His Treasures |
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![]() ![]() ![]() i still don't get why that sacred gear is a thing to control the emperor's its only an ability stemmed from gods hatred of dragons and even still if god had that ability then why didn't he use it against the two Emperor's in the great war |
![]() ![]() ![]() why is making them dragons not an option theres no reason its not an option and if you make one up it would just be an excuse to leave them weak |
![]() ![]() To as is the definition of I'm stupid do it for me |
![]() ![]() ![]() We're thirty chapters into this story and you've given Rias next to no credit or character development. Your portrayal of her is brutally unfair and nothing like her characterization in the light novels. I'd like it if you focused more on accuracy of the characters outside of Issei and Irina(who have been different since you specified as much). Honestly its offputting how well this story started off and how it really hasn't developed in any meaningful ways since, even Xenovia and Irina especially seem to have taken a massive backseat. Irina is supposed to be the main girl here but she really doesnt feel like it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dude the way your characters talk during a fight is cheesy, corny and extremely annoying, at least be a little realistic and don’t have them blabber on so much. I swear it’s such a common trope with you irritating Americans. |
![]() ![]() Good grief. How does this man not shrivel up into a raisin with all his “activities”. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wouldn't mind a kendo orgy chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was amazing cant wait for the next part |
![]() ![]() Good shit |
![]() ![]() ![]() great to see asia come into her own, looking forward to see how this changes the story and excited for the next chapter |
![]() ![]() Man, Asia was a badass in this chapter. If only this Asia was the Canon Asia. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Must have more asap. love it so far, keep it up. can't wait to see what happens next. unleash the Asia indeed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome update. Really enjoyed reading this chapter. Looking forward to reading more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahhhh! You tease! Wonder why you randomly brought Connia back just to kill him off again, much less plow a girl lol. |