I am edgy pottah the boy who doesn't give a fuck
Jk love the story so far

This is about your rant this chapter and your right this person is the type who doesn't have anything better to do than insult the work of others and doesn't seem to at least have either the decency or brain give advice on how to improve. If I had to guess the. he says the same thing everytime and sounds lime a broken record. I would like to say I love the story so far and see nothing wrong with it.

McGonabitch lmao

Wow, ive never read and HP like this, i love it.

Idk about anyone else, but I'm imagining Harry wearing Corvo Attano's mask from Dishonored 1. It's poetic actually. Corvo generally means raven in Latin. And also, Belladrum was duped to be dishonored by her husband.

It wasn't bad until about chapter 35 or 40, not counting Harry's stupid monologues. But then, everything became extremely disgusting, some kind of deranged plot, what a stupid organization Libra, stupid heroes, everything became very exaggerated, like a teenager in puberty. Up to chapter 35 7/10, and after 2/10.

Boooo. Harry had the jump on her and could have got the kill before making it a dramatic encounter

Love your story and dialogues, thank you for sharing

Lock him up! Failing that leash him.

Got to say I didn't expect the whole son angle, kinda threw me for a loop and I've gotta say it seems pretty out of place and sudden in the story. Hopefully it pays dividends in future chapters

Ooof continuity error! You said Amelia was made interim minister for magic a couple chapters ago ... how did fudge get reinstated?

Omg Harry singing the riverboat song from Willy Wonka before going on a John Wick killing spree was absolutely glorious. Your writing of the character is easily my favourite Grey!Harry I've ever read

Great chapter, although I would have though Harry's animagus form would have been something more deadly like a panther or a tiger but beggars can't really be choosers. Great stuff though, your story has been a breath of fresh air in the HP fanfic world to me and I'm looking forward to checking out your other works when I'm done!

I had no problem with the Mcgonagall\Potter confrontation. If done wrong it would have read like poor crack. But you have written the Potter character quite well. By leaving everything about Harry a mystery, he comes off as believable, and not a Gary-Stue. And I appreciate the fine line that you have been waking with your character to prevent him from becoming one. Thanks.

"I'm not stuck in this school with YOU! You're all stuck here with ME!" You haven't even deviated from canon plot much. Just made it a whole lot more entertaining to read! Thanks again.