Thank you for writing this deeply beautiful and tragic story. I would love to read the ending! You captured Bella's pain and loss so well. I hope she finds some peace.

Where's the rest, cunt?

Alice was a fuck up in every story. The slut excelled at shopping, partying, and watching Edward romance Bella. Her visions was a fucking joke. Why is Bella even living with the Cullen assholes.

Brilliant. You captured the dread and hopelessness in that moment where they're trying to resuscitate her so well, and it makes the payoff so WORTH IT when she comes back, even knowing that's what happens. *tips hat.

I have to brace myself, this is written so well. Even in small, seemingly simple ways, you show so much skill: "The words came like fire, catching and quick." Mate, I GASPED, that little sentence is so good. Emmett smashing his fist through the glass. So unbelievably good. I love when Alice is written as a darker, more mystical being with a terrible burden for a power. You've drawn the Cullens into characters with a lot of depth. Can't wait to dive into this one again.

It's so rare and refreshing to find a fic where Bella isn't choosing between men, but chooses herself. Yes, Bella absolutely needs to develop her sense of self before she gets into any serious relationship.

I know the odds of any more of this being posted are low, but I can hope.

FWIW Bella's experience with depression here matches up with mine pretty well... Especially when my first boyfriend dumped me out of the blue junior year of high school. It's absolutely understandable that she wouldn't be able to trust them. It was absolutely unreasonable (and infuriating) how unquestioningly she took them all back.

Well, I'm glad Alice fully went for him.

It sure seems like they should just run at this point. I guess they'd always be looking over their shoulders, but 7 against 12, even with their talents, sure seems risky.

Love how many realizations of past wrongs they're having.

I'm totally with Alice on this one. It's past due.

Wow, that was intense. The Cullens absolutely deserve to feel guilty for abandoning Bella, and I'm glad to see that satisfied in fics.

Top notch hurt/comfort. Great emotional tension.

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I was hoping it might go like this!

Also, all this so far has been beautifully written.

Oh my god! I love this story so much. You are an incredible author, and your grasp on the characters is beautiful. Emmett’s POV when driving to Bella’s house was haunting, and the dread that you feel wondering what happened to Charlie is just heart wrenching. I’ve been crying the whole time and I’m only mid-way through the story :’(

I love how you write their perspective’s on eternity, how Bella seems like a connection to ‘change’ that they have lost. I love each of the Cullen’s relationships, and how they each love Bella.

Thank you so much for sharing this story! I truly hope you are doing well, and am going to keep enjoying it now. xoxo

I gobbled this story up in one sitting and I have to say, I cried like a baby. Thank you so much for sharing, I hope to see an update again!