Oh man this is almost finished! I can’t wait to see what you write next xo

Great update. Thank you ;)

I do love how you’ve brought your Bella and the entire family through struggles with mental health and especially Bella’s struggle with not wanting to accept their help because of her fear of hurt and rejection again. You’ve fixed every issue I took with SM and her juvenile portrayal of an adult topic. Hope you and all yours are well during this crazy time we live in!

I think Rosalie always had redeeming qualities. She is a complex character and it's nice to see her react differently than all the others.

please update!

Thank you so much for this story. I love your writing and this story in particular. It has much more depth and maturity than the original books, and it is a heart-wrenching and wonderful read.

I am hooked! I have to agree with you- the series does a real shitty job portraying Bella’s mental health. SM just kind of glosses over Bella’s reaction to the OBVIOUS trauma that was inflicted upon her throughout the series. It always irked me how the poor girl would suffer book after book, but then suddenly gets a painless and happy ending without any consequences? I am intrigued by the direction of your story, however. I look forward to the next update!

I am hooked! I agree with you- the books did a real shitty job talking about the obvious trauma Bella has been through throughout the entire series. SM just kind of glosses over it and pretends like everything was okay when obviously there should have been some consequences. I am very intrigued by thee direction that this story is going. I look forward to the next update!

I thought this version of Bella’s change was very realistic and believable. I’ve loved everything you’ve done with this entire story. I hope you are able to rest easy at this difficult time in our world. Looking forward to your next chapter. Take care.

So sorry to hear about your MacBook. Hope it gets fixed quickly. Writing that much on your phone must have been a nightmare! Great chapter. I love this Esme.

I know you went through heck to write this, all those versions, but it’s really, really good, IMHO. Thank you!

So, Edward has been cut down to size. Does he finally understand that it’s not about what he needs or wants any longer? Certainly hope so.

LOVE the way you handled Rosalie. Excellent!

Well done, Alice!

I couldn’t believe Jasper told Bella what was going on. I understand why he did it, but I knew it would be a mistake.