Reviews for Gargoyles: Daughter of two worlds
Charlotte Katakuri chapter 15 . 10/7
Glad to see you're back at writing. But in my opinion, and no offense to you, your stories need more deviation from the source material. You have an entirely new, immortal character as a detective. There could be opportunities to give Athena adventures completely separate from the gargoyles(both in the present day and previous eras), you could impose consequences due to her detective profession, or give more twists to this universe's version of Magic.
Crystal-Wolf-Guardain-967 chapter 13 . 12/25/2020
loved it! more please?! keep up the awesome work!
Crystal-Wolf-Guardain-967 chapter 12 . 12/24/2020
Loved it!
White Tiger Bumblebee chapter 10 . 12/11/2020
Great work.
Crystal-Wolf-Guardain-967 chapter 9 . 10/28/2020
Loved it! More please?!
Charlotte Katakuri chapter 1 . 8/3/2020
As your story stands apart from Athena using magic, this is no different from the show. If you want to insert an OC, you should add some flare to the original script. For example you had Athena, a detective, assist in attacking Cyberbiotics. You could have had Athena get into trouble with her superiors for doing that, which could have been a great consequence.
Bnk chapter 8 . 5/24/2020
Great chapter on gargoyles: daughter of two worlds, so can you please put up the next chapter to the story now please
Sissi1789 chapter 8 . 5/24/2020
I really like your story, I can't wait to find out more
LivininCorsets chapter 8 . 5/24/2020
I’m so giddy about the Puck episode coming up soon- can’t remember how many episodes but I can “see” how many ways it would go
LivininCorsets chapter 7 . 4/19/2020
Speaking of arrowverse...does this mean you’re going to add more DC comics to the mix- even if it’s just the JLDark team? I can see Athena getting pissed at John Constantine for consistently using her husband, and her getting along with Zatanna. Not to mention Zatanna getting along with Elisa. Then again I can hear her arguing with Clark and Diana about her family “the only one that is dangerous is my mother! She went off the rails centuries ago!”

Then again it’s possible that Athena and Jason also have fought against Macbeth a few times over the years.

Also will this eventually get moved to The DC crossover section?
xxxMadameMysteryxxx chapter 7 . 3/27/2020
Great chapter and looking forward to the next one
JustinC100 chapter 3 . 2/25/2020
I was on board with the idea, but you didn't change anything. You introduced a new character but gave her the same lines that were already said. Yeah, you put in great descriptions and even put in extra lines but it doesn't change the story in the slightest. I might as well rewatch the series. Good try, nice effort... But ultimately not enough.
Nathan Kirk chapter 6 . 1/25/2020
Great story and all, but from what I learned and understood, King Arthur was on the isle of Avalon long before the gargoyles were trapped in their stone sleep; so the beginning of this chapter doesn’t make since chronologically.
Vcy chapter 6 . 1/14/2020
Great chapter on gargoyles: daughter of two world's, so can you please put up the next chapter to the story now please
Crystal-Wolf-Guardain-967 chapter 6 . 1/14/2020
Loved it!
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