Reviews for Love's A Beautiful Battlefield
Woggles93 chapter 16 . 6/30
Yay you updated, and I need an escape right now! :)
Firstly no baby...WHY?! They best get onto it in the head teachers office soon ;)
Melissa, just go back into the hole you came from!
Loved the update, update soon xx
Pongo0614 chapter 16 . 6/30
I am fairly certain I asked you make this all okay. Definitely with Eddie there. NEVER going to forgive Melissa for that. And the bitch didn't even own up to what she did.
I am glad that Rachel is okay but... I wished the baby was okay as well. That must be awful for the pair of them, especially with the reason for Melissa's reappearance hanging over them as well.
Please tell me that they are going to be okay too... I am in tears here.
fayeftvanity chapter 16 . 6/30
first of all don't apologise you were giving us another master class in rotating day I'm sure this will be worth the wait and I'm so excited. second I'm glad you finally have some downtime because it's what you deserve. basically I'm super proud of you I'm cannot wait to review and read so let's get to it. Melissa really is justsomething else isn't she and I actually can't . jumping through the screen to give Eddie a hug please ok I'm sobbing buckets for them both. ok wow that Hurt um I'm not prepared for that pain ever but gosh as ever beautifully written
hannah5240 chapter 16 . 6/30
Seeing an update of this was a lovely surprise, I wasn’t expecting it :)
Oh. My. Word. As if Melissa didn’t even own up, lying to Eddie’s face like that and then proceeding to talk about her baby. Typical of her to be so selfish really.
My heart is actually breaking for them both... and the baby, that’s so so sad. I really do hate Melissa with every bone in my body at this point.
Wondering where they are going to go from here, but hoping that they’ll get through it all together, like the partnership they are.
I was absolutely hooked to the screen for the entirety of this chapter, brilliantly written as usual. I need more already! X
MissChloeee chapter 16 . 6/30
MELISSAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!
RachelMasonFan39 chapter 16 . 6/30
I love this chapter!
Poor Rachel!
I hate Melissa for making her lose the baby!
Brilliant update!
Guest chapter 15 . 5/30
Wtf I need an update
Woggles93 chapter 15 . 5/18
OMG how could you bring her back! She’s just a level above Adam and Stuart!
Oh how I wish Rachel could just stab her, just kill her off, no one will miss her!
She has a damn cheek when it comes to Eddie, Rachel and Eddie, Reddie, you don’t see Eel?! Get a grip Mel and go back into hiding.
Can’t wait for more! Update soon xx
elle-mae-xx chapter 15 . 5/18
Oh my goodness I’ve just caught up and this is all kinds of incredible! I love what you’ve done with their relationship, and I can’t wait to read what happens next. I hope Rachel is still pregnant and both her and the baby are fine. Absolutely brilliant x
FaeMelody chapter 15 . 5/18
WHAT? WHAT DID YOU DO? OMG! Please please please please please update this asap! X
Pongo0614 chapter 15 . 5/18
No. No. No. No. *Shakes head* That did not just happen. Come out of hiding to give me chaapter 16 that makes everything okay.
So... Everything that Melissa said didn't shock me... Maybe because of how I have made Melissa in a couple of my fics. Because Bitchy Melissa is the best Melissa.
I just wished that their happiness could have lasted just a little longer
fayeftvanity chapter 5 . 5/18
first of all let's talk about how excited I am for this because you know it. second of all you literally don't have to thank us you work hard and we see the potential in the hard work and ideas and hype are you up at any given opportunity. got the popcorn and the slap prepared. let's do this. the way I feel like that you worry too much comment could literally be a conversation between you and I because literally relatable but am I surprised at this point. ok can Melissa go away already she's only just turned up at the door and made her little dig I'm already annoyed this isn't gonna go well for me. ok I'm going to hit her please. oh my god the way Rachel just shut the door I'm so proud of my queen. the Eddie only agreed to leave once he knew that Rach I knew it was because she did ask absolutely love that for us. give Rach a hug I love the pure honesty with which she talks about how she got to where she is now honestly just makes me so proud of her. oh my godI really should not be surprised every time I get angry and Melissa but every time she opens her mouth it gets worse. imagine being Melissa sitting there insinuating that Rachel and Eddie had cheated please bitch your the only one who lies every time she opens her mouth like don't judge other people by your very shit standards. The way I'm just sending this entire chapter cheering Rachel on we love to see it. I love him and it's remarkable please excuse me whilst I sobs god that's our idiots and I love them. Melissa does realise the difference in situation doesn't she or is she really that thick like big difference lovePhillip actually was your responsibility you technically weren't Rachel's as much as you have to be also you brought your situation on yourself. stop the way she's talking about how Eddie is by herside and she wants it all with him and maybe I'm going to have to go and cry are too soft I love this Gemma wtf please ouch ouch that Hurt I swear to god poor Rach she deserves protection it's a good job I love and trust you and know that you're going to make this better but I'm literally so proud of this entire chapter I know how hard you worked on it and how much you love it so I'm so proud of you. fyi falling a protection circle for Rachael right now because she deserves the world
deppsterr chapter 15 . 5/18
No no no that ending did not happen
MissChloeee chapter 15 . 5/18
:O

Melissa stoops low but my god…

I really hope the baby will be okay, but…

I just hope either Eddie or Phil get home quickly.

Absolutely cannot wait for more! Brilliant stuff.
hannah5240 chapter 15 . 5/18
Yikes my hatred for Melissa has just increased a substantial amount... how horrible and inconsiderate can one person be?! I did love how Eddie decided to kiss Rachel right in front of Melissa, made me laugh not going to lie. But oh my days what a cliffhanger... don’t worry, you don’t have to go into hiding because I trust you :) just as long as Rachel and the baby are okay. I’m hoping that Melissa actually feels incredibly guilty now... although I’m not sure how likely that is at the moment. Love this so much and I’m very excited for more x
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