i think you're wrong about what exactly the will of gaia is, to my understanding it is the will of the planet itself to continue existing, so essentially it's a fancy way of saying that the planet is alive and trying to set everything to the status quo that is the "age of man" so the decline of magic and the active degradation of any magecraft used, and this is something unique to the nasuverse, so if shirou is taken to a separate univese where there's an abundance of mana it would mean either the "age of gods" there hasn't ended or the earth itself isn't trying to kill magic or even both at once, and these are good for shiro because if the age of gods is active then the "gaia" there is lax and won't be trying to degrade Shirou's projections(they'd still be one rank lower but they won't dissolve into prana after time has passed, so shirou wouldn't have to use more prana to keep them projected), same goes for the other condition, and also since gaia isn't pushing down on his magecraft UBW would be easier to use and can be kept active for a longer time since he'd also not be using a whole lot of prana as upkeep, TLDR (gaia as it exists in the nasuverse is a unique existence, so while shirou won't get stronger in other worlds his abilities would be much easier to use), but that's just my opinion

great story hope you finish it eventually

Once again, high praise for making KHR into a series that not only works, but seems more interesting than it's source. I'd love to read this to the end once day, but it does seem like a fool's errand. Still, maybe once day, you'll pick this up again.

Doing my semi annual reread of this, and its still one of favorite Fate and reborn stories. i love Natsumi, and whole Emiya clan. i hope you come back to continue this one day

I guess this Shirou still can't use his Unlimited Blade Works if it's the Sakura route ver gone wrong.
I feel like if he could he'd win but eh, straight combat outside of his Marble isn't what he's good at.

great series. cant wait for more

cuando continuaras

shit, its been so long since i saw the anime, im mixing up yamamoto's face with sawamura daichi's face xD

*Natsumi planting a flower* ... well fuck, that melted the hell out of my heart.

*sees end part* Oh bugger off timoteo

lmao

holy fuck its only been 7 chapters

(taiga?)

That is... Confusing. Generally when seeing a gender bent male character, you expect it to be done for them to paired with another male character...

But you have the gender bent male character see the one we expected them to be paired with as a brother figure. Then have them be attracted to females... Why didn't you just cut out the gender bent part and made him male?

You also made Irisviel a Lesbian... But loyal to Kiritsugu... Who is a male. What's the point of that? Why did you add such details if it was just going to make things complicated and confusing? Should've just left their relationship alone.

Before an idiot mentions homophobia, there's no real issue with it. It just came out of nowhere and for no real reason other than to simply have it. No signs or build up. I expected ShirouxNatsumi. So safe to say, I am pretty disappointed by this sudden development...

Yeah... That Shirou moment was a cringe fest in a half. Skipped right to the end once he said "...don't die" ... Seriously? I was expecting a reaction, but surely you could have come up with a better one. In all fairness, it checks out with some other reactions. Such as instantly offering Taiga food upon the first meeting. But I wish it wasn't so damn cringe inducing.

This is a great story hope you haven't dropped it but if you have thank you for what you written and know just by the fact this story been reviewed so much you did a good job

I stop at chapter 8, the guy has become an emotional lackey the moment we talk about Tsuna and his adopted sister, with whom he has an uncomfortable relationship for a kid he raised, this crush is way too much. For someone who has lived so much, he makes life too easy for Reborn, suffice to say that it's for Tsuna to make him go out of his way and with Tsuna who is also being manipulated, the guy has become a little lackey, he is stupid, giving this kind of materials for the uniform in the presence of an assassin, fighting with Reborn without thinking and noticing that he is being manipulated and therefore forgetting the promise he made to his father not to s approaching Reborn, in short, I stop there.