Reviews for A Storm of Swords
808 chapter 30 . 1/28
You know rereading this reminded me why I stopped reading your fics. It's not because of you bashing some characters, it's because of you trying to justify it rather than just plain up saying you dislike the character. It's dumb, if you dislike a character just say it! If you're going to bash a character don't try to justify it! Every one has their own takes on characters and I can respect that... But you, you are just being petty for the sake of it. You get easily provoked by comments, and immediately heel turn in the slightest offence... This is why you often get negative criticism. This includes you often trying to shift the blame to the reviewers when you are equally as guilty by stooping down to their level.
Carrotglace85 chapter 32 . 1/3
still a cool story bro, i dont know how shirou could know how to repair soul damage, i dont remember that tidbit during my previous reads, also im imagining shirou getting his own attractiion at mafialand, a giant mountain splitting sword through reborns head sounds nice.
springywinter chapter 2 . 1/2
Despite the more positive change in Natsumi's life, funny how she still encounters her guardians. Interesting to see the roster swap beteween Shirou and Hayato.
Kurogane201211 chapter 32 . 10/3/2024
i think you're wrong about what exactly the will of gaia is, to my understanding it is the will of the planet itself to continue existing, so essentially it's a fancy way of saying that the planet is alive and trying to set everything to the status quo that is the "age of man" so the decline of magic and the active degradation of any magecraft used, and this is something unique to the nasuverse, so if shirou is taken to a separate univese where there's an abundance of mana it would mean either the "age of gods" there hasn't ended or the earth itself isn't trying to kill magic or even both at once, and these are good for shiro because if the age of gods is active then the "gaia" there is lax and won't be trying to degrade Shirou's projections(they'd still be one rank lower but they won't dissolve into prana after time has passed, so shirou wouldn't have to use more prana to keep them projected), same goes for the other condition, and also since gaia isn't pushing down on his magecraft UBW would be easier to use and can be kept active for a longer time since he'd also not be using a whole lot of prana as upkeep, TLDR (gaia as it exists in the nasuverse is a unique existence, so while shirou won't get stronger in other worlds his abilities would be much easier to use), but that's just my opinion
Trinix8 chapter 32 . 10/1/2024
great story hope you finish it eventually
Aramaki chapter 32 . 9/17/2024
Once again, high praise for making KHR into a series that not only works, but seems more interesting than it's source. I'd love to read this to the end once day, but it does seem like a fool's errand. Still, maybe once day, you'll pick this up again.
Questara chapter 32 . 7/29/2024
Doing my semi annual reread of this, and its still one of favorite Fate and reborn stories. i love Natsumi, and whole Emiya clan. i hope you come back to continue this one day
2hupedia chapter 7 . 5/21/2024
I guess this Shirou still can't use his Unlimited Blade Works if it's the Sakura route ver gone wrong.
I feel like if he could he'd win but eh, straight combat outside of his Marble isn't what he's good at.
Bookmarkjda chapter 32 . 4/14/2024
great series. cant wait for more
akhiro dragnell chapter 32 . 3/14/2024
cuando continuaras
Hwang Manuel chapter 15 . 2/25/2024
shit, its been so long since i saw the anime, im mixing up yamamoto's face with sawamura daichi's face xD
Hwang Manuel chapter 10 . 2/24/2024
*Natsumi planting a flower* ... well fuck, that melted the hell out of my heart.

*sees end part* Oh bugger off timoteo
Hwang Manuel chapter 8 . 2/24/2024
lmao
Hwang Manuel chapter 7 . 2/24/2024
holy fuck its only been 7 chapters

(taiga?)
Guest chapter 27 . 1/6/2024
That is... Confusing. Generally when seeing a gender bent male character, you expect it to be done for them to paired with another male character...

But you have the gender bent male character see the one we expected them to be paired with as a brother figure. Then have them be attracted to females... Why didn't you just cut out the gender bent part and made him male?

You also made Irisviel a Lesbian... But loyal to Kiritsugu... Who is a male. What's the point of that? Why did you add such details if it was just going to make things complicated and confusing? Should've just left their relationship alone.

Before an idiot mentions homophobia, there's no real issue with it. It just came out of nowhere and for no real reason other than to simply have it. No signs or build up. I expected ShirouxNatsumi. So safe to say, I am pretty disappointed by this sudden development...
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