Reviews for A Storm of Swords |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I've been waiting for an update for so long, thank you |
![]() ![]() ![]() why not have haru as lightning. more girls in the guardians. it feels more balance than reverse harem feel. plus more unique. I haven't read a fic that choose that way. the official guardians and not just added allies. I have read haru as member of the familia but not balancing the guardians. then again, mafia is more men's job but there is a female previews boss from what I remember。but not sure. its not been brought up that much in fictions that I read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() that is one hell of a teacher |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not bad. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm honestly not certain if you were being too harsh on Hayato's character or not. I'll give it the benefit of the doubt. About the Lightning flames, I was one of the people who suggested them and I stand by my arguments. Also, about him not getting anything new out of lightning flames, I mentioned three ways he could incorporate lightning flames with his tracing without even mentioning the hardening property, and I'm certain it would be possible to come up with more (making barriers since he usually struggles with shields, extending the the edge of the blade by covering it with lightning flames and hardening them to make solid and sharp which could make for either a surprise attack or a long ranged one that doesn't require his bow). Whilst for the storm flames desintegration properties, I can't think of anything that he would be able to use them for that he couldn't replicate anyway by using either a fire or destructive sword, or by shodily reinforcing something until it breaks. But honestly, I doubt I can actually convince you and it's your story, so let's just agree to disagree. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Shirou really would do well in that position. He certainly has the skills for it. Very cool idea, and I am really enjoying that you have here already. Seems like it will be a wild ride. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can definitely see Gokudera taking over the Lightning Guardian position, if only because of the unholy fury that would result if Shirou were to find out a baby was fighting. I'm going to guess that either the sisters don't have all the information on Gokudera or you really just don't like him for some reason. Did a little research, he was apparently never able to join any families because they thought he was nothing more than a musician (an unorthodox one, since his sister would intentionally poison him for fun before a performance). |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hohoho great great |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like what I've read so far and I hope you don't drop Gokudera I mean come on he is 10 times better then Lambo. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't see why should Shirou get flames that add to his toolkit. He's plenty strong enough. So I say that his the element should fit his personality. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can definitely see why Lambo would be the one to take out of the group. Also I'm glad that Shirou is the storm guardian. Mainly because I'm excited to see him fight Belphegor. That's either going to be epic or hilarious. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter, man it's been a long time since I read Reborn. I like that you show multiple perspectives other than just Shirou, it gives you a look at how Shirou is situated in this world and with the recent development, it seems that Shirou is now aware of the mafia and could possibly make connections on it's relation to Natsumi and his family. In any case, keep up the good work and keep have a good day! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! This continues! I'm liking how this fic fuses the ReBorn and Prisma Illya universes so far...and I'd totally be down for reading a fic about Kiritsugu against the Einzbern Familia! Also, suuuure, Natsumi's dad's death is definitely unexplained...probably because it was handled by professionals...that live next door. Eventually, somebody is gonna ask Shirou questions...I look forward to that day. Thanks for the chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dado que has hablado de magos en ti historia creo que sería genial que en tu historia este Luvia y Sakura. Luvia como Guardián de la llama del Sol y Sakura como Guardián de la niebla. Sabes espero que Shirou sólo use en tu historia sus espadas gemelas y luego cuando obtenga su caja posea las pistolas de Alter-Emiya. Creo que Shirou para que encaje mejor en el universo de KHR sus armas deben venir de las cajas. Espero que entre esos objetos místicos del resto de familias resguarda secretamente estén barias armas antiguas de los mitos y leyendas. Como podrían ser Clarent, Gea-Bulg y La Carroza Gordius para el uso de Shirou. (armas con aura de rayos Carmesí) |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Like with the rest of the Emiya residence, Natsumi had known Leysritt and Sella for most of her life. They had acted like of like older sisters to her, or perhaps aunts. Though in all honesty, she didn't know that much about them, like their ages." *kind of like or just *they acted like older sisters to her "The two both looked like they were eighteen or nineteen years old, with beautiful snowy white hair, pale skin and well developed figures, which had often left Natsumi feeling a little envious, since she had always been on the small side for her age, and she had never been able to tame her messy brown hair, no matter what she tried. But the two of them had always looked like that." Either *both looked like Or *the two looked like |