Reviews for A Storm of Swords |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Gokudera vs Levi-a-tan. Who is the most loyal lightning guardian. I look foward to the ring battles now. Also, Shirou vs Prince the ripper. Wonder who is the most psycho of the two. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh wow, this was dark... AND AMAZING! I think i might like this more than Cloud of Leaves, and I didn't think that was possible! 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn that was good |
![]() ![]() ![]() Proof that Sakura is broken, that time with the Matou simply broke her. What flames has Shirou access? or is he simply imitating the flames with magecraft? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story hooked me into it like ur other works.. i dun know why but this story gives a refeshing change unlike ur other stories.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this so far, it's only the first chapter and I'm hooked. Keep at it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a great chapter and I have to agree with you that Sakura is the worst girl. Next to nothing good comes out for anyone in the heaven's feel route beside Sakura herself and while it wasn't all her fault she definitely could have done more than she did. Though I dunno about her betraying Archer I feel like she may be possessive but she wouldn't turn her back on him like that. She may try to kidnap him and keep him tied up though. Anyways I also think that giving Shirou lightning flames would be better than storm flames. While Shirou can be a wild beast in combat he has always been more of a self sacrificing, calm, tactical defender. |
![]() ![]() ![]() realism my ass |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sakura would never *ever* betray Shirou like that, it's a ridiculous concept from the very start. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This looks rad as hell, can't wait to see more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ... You know. That WOULD explain WHY MOON CELL is a SAKURA-Face. She wanted him so BADLY, she offered him a contract and killed him. 'Now Sempai will NEVER leave me!' And yes. Sakura was always worst girl. Outside of the Prismaverse. And Fanon! Sincerely, CG |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Also, the bit about Shirou dying at the end of his life because he was betrayed by Sakura, that's actually the Nameless Archer's real back story." wait, where did you get that from ? |
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![]() ![]() ![]() ohh... nice |
![]() ![]() ![]() Shirou as the Storm Guardian? That is... interesting? I'm sorry, I'm not trying to tell you how to write your story, but "Continuously at the heart of the attack, the furious Storm that never rests." I guess it can sort of fit Shirou if you take his determinator character into account but honestly, Shirou has more of a defensive/counter acting sort of stance on things. Honestly, I'd say the lightning flame suits him better, maybe with a side of cloud if you take EMIYA into account. But really "To draw damage to himself and away from the rest of the Famiglia, serving as a lightning rod." Come on, that basically describes Shirou Emiya almost perfectly ! Plus, the lightning flame property of hardening is also way more in line with his capabilities than the storm's desintegration. Bonus points because you can still get rid of Lambo as a Guardian without losing any of the other guardians ( nothing against the kid but you don't have FREAKING 5 YEAR OLDS as one of your frontline fighters ). Plus, lightning flames do work as electricity, so they would work way better with Shirou's tracing (conduit electricity through the blades, electromagnetic weapons, freaking sword railguns) than desintegration. PS: You really need to do something about your thing of not completing your stories. Look, I really hate to bring this up because you're a really good writer and I kinda feel like like I'm accusing you or something, but this really feels like your biggest flaw. All your stories are either really cool ideas that seem to get dropped after a chapter or two, or they get really long and really good and have people get really invested in them, only for you to suddenly focus on something else and completely forget about them. And while the new story might be really good, I personally am already resigning myself to just enjoying it while I can because I already expect it to be abandoned. |