Reviews for A Storm of Swords
doubledamn chapter 1 . 10/27/2019
Given your previous work this should work well as my introduction to the Reborn! series.
Ranmaleopard chapter 1 . 10/27/2019
As always this is just really interesting and I can't wait to see what happens next. I eagerly await your next enjoyable chapter. Please continue
UnusualReality chapter 1 . 10/27/2019
Holy crap, i haver loved Sakura for years, but no Full Rin suport. Thanks for the history, the slice of life is take from magical girls Ilias?
Clockwork Meagerie chapter 1 . 10/27/2019
Due to the nature of Type Moon, Shirou/Archer should have a weapon to counter each type of flame. Shirou/Archer is broken in Katekyo.
Quathis chapter 1 . 10/27/2019
Loving the changes in Reborn-verse. The set up looks fun and Shirou as a psuedo Guardian, or a real one(hard to say with his magical nature), would make for a much different dynamic here. Especially with Illya and her Flames mixed into this. Until next time.
Jester le Fae chapter 1 . 10/27/2019
Hehehehehe wasn’t sure where you were going with the first bit but then it made sense. Got some Prisma Illya vibes which was amusing.
Question: Sakura betrayed the CCC Nameless Archer or was it one of the other Fate games?
CHEERS BRO!
Live. Laugh. Repeat.
Jrocker105 chapter 1 . 10/27/2019
Huh, I was apprehensive when I read the summary but this is actually a really good story. I’d like to see where you go with it.
Guy2506 chapter 1 . 10/27/2019
Nameless archer wasn't betrayed by Sakura, IIRC he was betrayed by his friend.
War O' The Willow chapter 1 . 10/27/2019
Away with you and your Sakura worst girl heresy! (Also "the Nameless Archer" is Extra Archer, so I'm gonna assume you meant Counter Guardian Archer? Who is named 'EMIYA,' and is not nameless in the proverbial sense? Anyway...)
Now that the nonsense is out of the way, I'm really digging your 'fusion' of Nasuverse (well, Fate specifically) characters with the KHR concepts and world. I'll be happy to read more, should you choose to write more. I've been a fan of most of your takes on Shirou, so I'll be interested in seeing where you take him this time.
(Also I really appreciate that Reborn treats Tsuna getting stripped a bit more delicately than with canon Tsuna, thank you for that.)
((Also also, I like your take on fem!Tsuna and her dynamic with the beginning cast. Kudos.))
(((Good luck with your writing!)))
((((Help there are too many brackets I can't hold them much-))))
tl34lt12 chapter 1 . 10/27/2019
This looks promising, a good FSN x KHR Fic

BUT

Sakura is not worst girl, she is troubled and damaged thanks to Matou and Tohsaka families.

Rin way meaner and heartless. Never bothered to check up on her still blood sister, even with suspicions. Gives off death threats. Willing to join and continue death tournament due to Magi pride. Willing to join those sociopaths in Clock Tower. And is very manipulative for her own ends.
Creus chapter 1 . 10/27/2019
Very interesting! You have my attention.
Add to Follow/Fav.
skrapsynneh chapter 1 . 10/27/2019
Thank you for the new story. I look forwards to more.
Silber D. Wolf chapter 1 . 10/27/2019
great
Drow57 chapter 1 . 10/27/2019
Damn, that is good! I'am waiting more this story!
Dangulus chapter 1 . 10/27/2019
Its fanfiction I get it, but you're kinda stretching it with Sakura.

Archer was betrayed by an unnamed character and the possibility of it being Sakura is way lower than you think.

I hope this story goes the way you want to go, and you don't can it like your other one.
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