Reviews for A Storm of Swords |
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![]() ![]() ![]() That's one mean prank Reborn pulled. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's impressive Shirou was able to put up a fight against someone like Reborn, if he's supposed to be in a similar weight class to Magicians. I guess the even more impressive thing is his will to even try, despite being outclassed. His limited Mana pool is a problem... Although personally I think that some of the ways Tracing is used are fishy, none of them really came up here. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the setup of this story. I haven't seen anyone use the Prisma Illya setup without also inheriting the plot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() man i hope to see you update soon because i can't not wait to see what will happen next maybe shirou also faund xana ada safe her also with hayato maybe xana will fall in love with him because it will be funny i guess also i just notice that you make natsumi still like kyoko because i really think you make her and shirou become couple maybe she is BI like both girl and boy anyway i just hope you will update soon because i really can't not wait to see what will happen next so bye has a nice day take care of your healty and stay safe update soon bye. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope you continue this someday. It good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So Will Shirou & Bianchi rescue Xana when they go for Gokudera? |
![]() ![]() ![]() According to the Typemoon Wiki, Taiga's luck has actually saved Fuyuki several times without her even knowing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() when will you update |
![]() ![]() Are you dead? |
![]() ![]() Are you dead? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Its already known that Shiro has memories from a parallel universe, not de and not dropped in that world and since his body and soul was born in that world he would not get any backlash from being in a mana enrich world. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think I know why your confused. For different crossovers where Shiro is in a world with gods and phantasm creatures he would get a boost or more like Gaia would not be restricting his magecraft and the mana in the world would be more potent meaning his soul and body would be empowered in order to survive there. Same like irl that people say we are getting weaker, people in nasuverse past were stronger because of all the mystery going on which made people stronger because of the potent mana in the world and Gaia was not rejecting Mana users as badly as it is in present nasuverse. The mafia world had mana user is canon in your story but not many anymore but that still means there is/was a magical system in the world but because there are so few mages the power of mystery would give Shiro a boost in his magecraft because the less is known/understood about something, the more inherently "mystical" it is. Gaia doesn't exist and mana was given to the world by a tree that is dead means that it stop producing mana but energy cannot be destroyed so that energy(mana) is in the atmosphere which ends up making people stronger/resilient with mana users getting the benefit of a system that won't fight against them which leads to them having stronger circuits and bodies that can withstand the environment. Gaia has a personality so saying its just a corrective force is only partially right since we have known that it called out for help from other planets with Crimson Moon being an example so yeah with no hateful Gaia against humans magecraft is easier to control. Third point is that this Shiro was experience in his magecraft since he died while he was an adult so his control and mastery are high so he won't be wasting any mana so his impressive control just got easier. Shiro butchering his training while young crippling his circuits by him using his nerves. In this life he didn't meaning his circuit would have their original quality. I love what your doing but just wanted to clarity the reason why people think mana being over abundant would power up any magecraft user. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fking Gae borg the little shit shiro. He can't beat causality. |
![]() ![]() Update? Preferably to your other stories? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update? |