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Very good updating here.

Keep the good writing.

you'd be taking all the fun out of it if you told everyone

...he knows the truth...

DAM! MOMO MOVES FAST

Well that was a really good story, i hope that ins ome time, you might post more chapters!

Why add some random villain? speed hunter really thats just rubbish. Also the relationship between Momo and Hayato is forced as hell they've had zero time together that we've seen and since Hayato missed the USJ incident (Which was a stupid descision BTW) a very important event in the show and could've been in this fic considering you could have made it where Hayato and Momo end up in the same area so we could've seen them together instead you skipped it. Anyway I'm probably gonna drop soon if this doesn't get better.

I'm disapointed in this chapter if this chapter is a reflection of whats to come then i should stop reading now. I hate authers who piggy back of the original work most of this chapter was copy pasted from the original something like 25% of it was from you. You should focus more on Hayato and less on Deku because we missed all of Hayato's exam beacuse you were too lazy to write anything original. I can only hope it gets better from here because they're aren't enough Momo as a love interest as their should be.

... What a cringe fest... Maybe I'm just too negative and pessimistic. Yeah, I'll probably just leave it there. I'm too pessimistic for this fan-fic, trying to make sense out of a story heavily based on a shounen with fast paced high school romances and unforgivable deadbeats, which is the reason all of these scenes are doing nothing but leaving me in disgusted cringe.

Well that moment between them definitely made up for intense cringe I was feeling I guess. It was pretty good. Most stories with Momo as a love interest consist of having her has a childhood friend and lover straight of the bat. Or Have mc's swoop in to save her before she gets raped by a villain, then both fall in love like bam. This is was well done. But I think the relationships moved extremely quick. Not Lemons quick but pretty quick regardless. Please to the lord I hope it doesn't get at the very least too cringy for me to even continue reading...

Why did he yell her name like that? Made me scroll all the way to the bottom to say how hardcore cringe that was. :/

Really don't like when deadbeats comeback when things are looking up for mc's. It is such a shameless thing that I will never appreciate. But I can already see how easy this is going to be and that is just absolutely annoying. Why write them as deadbeats if we aren't going to accept the fact that they are deadbeats. We really don't need them to be here so damn early in the story. Or at least don't write about them so early in the story. Make an interaction between them when he ACTUALLY NEEDS them, than put these scenes in a heartwarming flashback or something. You are trying way too hard. Hard to do what? couldn't really tell ya, but it's annoying and has to chill the fuck out. Because the timing is wrong, and all I can really feel for these deadbeats at this point in time are that they are pests to the story right now.

I don't know if showing those two having that conversation was supposed to make me hope for them to get along soon but all it really did was make me hope he won't forgive them and simply move on to have a prosperous life whilst forgetting their existences.

Throwin' up rainbows over here...

Sorry yo but the design for Hayato's suit was basically non-existent in comparison to Izuku's and Ochaco's descriptions. Like the hell is he wearing? Got a better description somewhere? Maybe an image? You only mentioned leather, a black cowl, and white eyes then said if he added a few other things, he'd look like someone else. All I can imagine right now is Zoom with glowing white eyes.