Reviews for Gift of the Demon
Ina Bauer chapter 4 . 11/11
Ich frage mich wann du endlich weiter schreibst? Schlie├člich hat diese FF sehr viel Potential.
Ich mag den Anfang deiner Geschichte und w├╝nsche mir noch sehr viele Kapitel hierzu.
Ep chapter 4 . 10/29
Excellent
Merci pour la lecture
Svenion chapter 3 . 10/24
not even a name change? this meeting seems intended to provoke Konoha. there's no way they thought bakashi wouldn't recognize the names or Naruto's appearance and report it to the hokage.
ethan.lukkar chapter 4 . 10/23
Magnificent chapter can't wait for more please update soon
thor94 chapter 4 . 10/21
Good chapter.
Can't wait the chunin exam, but ask what konoha can do.
They can't really claim kumo kidnapped their jinchuriki, since naruto left willingly, and as cilivian orphan without guardian naruto can move where he wants, no official law in konoha can prevent this
logancoyle86 chapter 4 . 10/21
this is just a very interesting story along with a interesting genkei kekkei. i really hope this updates faster.
Wishfull-star chapter 4 . 10/21
That was awesome I loved the chapter and I can't wait for whatever happens next stay safe:)
starfiction123 chapter 4 . 10/20
Oooooh I like this story! Oh ho ho I like this story already! Loads of potential I love the twist of events! I live for the konaha bashing lol in sorry like I'm glad naruto for his wanted sending but fudge that village lol I'm loving what you're doing with him here it just makes sense lol and I get my naruhina? Yep that's a follow
Jove21 chapter 3 . 10/20
This is quite interesting. Will definitely follow. Can't wait for the next chapters! :)
DarkRavie chapter 4 . 10/20
I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.
Guest chapter 3 . 9/24
Please update
Guest chapter 1 . 6/20
Will there be an update or is this Story abandoned?
Mason02 chapter 3 . 6/14
This story is so good. You absolutely need to update it.
MondprinzessinSerenity chapter 1 . 4/6
i really wish you would continue this story is great
SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 3 . 2/26
Well color me interested! Also I think there's a pretty big flaw with your made up demon bloodline limit. You said that it will make him resistant to ninjutsu, then said that he couldn't use the ninjutsu that he had resistance to himself as the so called "drawback" to keep him from being overpowered or whatever. But ninjutsu are just (magical chakra)ninja techniques. And if nothing affects him because he can essentially "eat" them then that implies that he technically can't use ANY ninja technique that aren't his bloodline limit including basic chakra strengthening, shunshin, shadow clones, etc. cuz those could be used against him and if they are and they fail he can't do them either; then he also can't even handle things that are chakra infused cuz he'd ruin them by "eating" them which would also mean he couldn't make his own which would include things like tags, seals, and so on. Which is all really just weak sauce. BUT you have him able to utilize seals anyway which goes against the limits you set as I understand them. So does that mean Kyuubi modified his "gift" to be less lame or does Naruto mastering or unlocking more levels to his new blood limit help him work around that? Or was those "rules" about it actually not that literal and strict?
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