Good grief did Lee and Amanda get anything to eat and rest for their weary bones from the previous (2nd) installment? What became of the poison that ruined their night off? Not a fan of leaving a story without closure.

Okay, on to this one. Very conflicted about this version of Nightcrawler, which hideously AND horrendously brutalized Lee. Such devastating injuries will surely shorten his lifespan. Is Birol dead or in prison? The lone bright spot is Amanda wearing his engagement ring. Hoping they don't engage in a mystery marriage! Will they even want to return to working at The Agency?

Wow! Love love love this!

Oh, I really loved your version of "Nightcrawler"!

I already loved Nightcrawler as it aired but this is a good version of it too. It already was pretty intense for SMK though and this makes it more so. Very well written and again..I love that you keep the characters true to how the show wrote them even in an AU story.

I just love happy ending. It would have been hard for the serie if Lee had been hurt this much on the Birol case.

I love the original proposal, but the second one was perfect!

This is better than the real "Nightcrawler" love your writing! Thank you!

Thank you!

Great spin on Nightcrawler. Thanks for another great story.

LOVE this Fatal Flaw series... Its just Great! Thanks for sharing. Linda

This one also. The actual episode end was kind of a let down. This is better.

How sweet! i don't like the fact that lee was shot and almost killed but I do like the fact that he onle proposed to her three times in a two week time period. Who said that things always happen with such lousy timing!

Excellent story! The way you described Lee's emotions during the struggle with Addi was great! Overall a very well written story.

Wow. Everytime I read this one, I wish it had happened this way. So much more intense. I know SMK was a light, innocent show, and I love it that way. BUT, I also love the intensity of this story. Adds so much more to their relationship.

Once again, Gail, an amazing story!