I was worried at first that you stopped updating in 2020, but I saw that you have followed some stories in 2023 an '24. I'm so glad you're ok, but sad you never continued this story.

Why

Nearly 5 years later and I am still waiting and hoping for an update

The grammar is horrible .

I'm not a writer myself but I am pretty sure there are people offering to proof read stories for free .

And you desperately need someone to edit your chapters .

The story is relatively interesting and progresses logically but other characters seem to be heavy on the passive side and just follow along the course set by MC .

Besides Yondu in the beggining and a couple of instances with Peter none of the other characters feature any important part in MCs life or meaningful interaction with the MC , not even his mother and grandfather .

I understand that the MC is grown up , completely independent and doing a lot all over the place but it seems like he doesn't interact with his family all that much .

I would expect James to realize he has become estranged from his family by now .

Also , your story suffers GREATLY from huge jumps in time and from glossing over stuff you REALLY should have went into great detail to explain .

The sense of hard work and progresses followed by accomplishment is completely absent and only makes James achievements seem like a cringe power fantasy .

James went from wanting to fly to flying at mach speeds in a few sentences ... Go back a check. It is literally how you wrote it .

And not long after he was already in orbit modifying a defunct satellite with hypercomms to the galactic civilization ... Which needed Vibranium to work ... and which he scavenged from Wakanda satellites AND learned how to manipulate to make the components ?

What ? Are you serious with that nonsense ?

EACH ONE of those needed at least a whole chapter by themselves and you just stuffed it all in a couple of paragraphs .

Also WHEN , WHERE did he build anything and most importantly HOW did he get the knowledge ?

The Mindscape ? You never went into full details of what was possible to do with it .
Can it really materialize ANY book or knowledge ? In the entire UNIVERSE ?
How the hell would he even know how to make an FTL comm system other than getting the knowledge from the Mindscape ?
Because you never stated that this is how he learned advanced knowledge I kust had to assume he learned it from there .

But if this IS how he learned it then James is an absolute failure in utilizing access to the ENTIRE KNOWLEDGE OF THE UNIVERSE .

He has perfect recall and time is streched in the Mindscape so what is stopping him from memorising the entire library of the Mystic Order ? Or even any other sorceries in the universe ?

Talk about a waste of gift from God ...

As for the last part. ... the gold .

What you did with the gold is nothing but stupid .

Out of all the things I mentioned this is the most bullshit nonsensical one.
Solar power from the surface of a human body creating hundreds of tonnes of gold ?
Do you actually believe that a beam of sunlight hitting your body has enough energy to CREATE MATTER ?

No offense but go back to school . You did not even learn common sense ...

Bro...the Pokemon hate is completely uncalled for!

Mate! Where r u?

why the hell are the power levels so screwed at age 7 u said he can fight thor to a standstill . now it been a fuckin decade and he can't fight a tired amateur captain Marvel while having a vibranium body with some extra powerful armour

also why the fuck is he a genius if he can't feckin absorb the very power she is emitting to grow more powerful

this chapter why the fuckin hostility

this is dumb

Bro two year old Dont ware Diapers and shit themselves and cry at least thats what I know
But he cant even speak is he a Retard baby or what

You re completely wrong of your perspective of readers, my thoughts about him is a simple minded jackass who has anger issues somehow gifted powers with a shitty reason running around in his fantasy wet dream.

He sounds pathetic.

This is some janky ass shit. Horrible grammar and sentence structure.

Bro you are amazing man keep updating

Ahh the story finally gets interesting and gets dropped