Reviews for Far From Powerless |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Followed you from Jelsa: Ice Alliance. I am very intrigued! is this Jaune as we know him realized differently or is this an ancestor of his? Is this something you struggle with personally or someone you know? Have you heard about Little James Character in the series The Chosen? I think you would find his portrayal encouraging and challenging. I think you have a good writing style but you need to work on show don't tell. Yet I am very intrigued and you are the second person I have favorited. First only being Jelsa: Ice Alliance from NopeNotTelling. I can't wait to read more and see where this goes! Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() Why would you write something like this? |
![]() ![]() Damn this is pretty bad. I cannot understand why you would publish this online. |
![]() ![]() Amazing how you're so good at criticizing... yet this piece of shit doesn't show anything but your inability to actually make an effort to writing a good story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey bro guess what? Your story is amazingly...shitty compared to your criticism ability. Go to literature school if u want to be snotty to others bub. |
![]() ![]() Damn, seems really cringe ngl. Also this seems like a Mary sue self insert more than anything. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Trash and garbage story by a garbage author |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please continue this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() that is a good start ! but I'm worried that the story will become out of control. like a jackSue, you konw ? |