Reviews for Far From Powerless
WingedHeart8416 chapter 1 . 11/30/2022
Followed you from Jelsa: Ice Alliance. I am very intrigued! is this Jaune as we know him realized differently or is this an ancestor of his? Is this something you struggle with personally or someone you know? Have you heard about Little James Character in the series The Chosen? I think you would find his portrayal encouraging and challenging. I think you have a good writing style but you need to work on show don't tell. Yet I am very intrigued and you are the second person I have favorited. First only being Jelsa: Ice Alliance from NopeNotTelling. I can't wait to read more and see where this goes! Keep up the good work!
Bruh chapter 1 . 9/8/2022
Why would you write something like this?
Guest chapter 1 . 7/29/2022
Damn this is pretty bad.
I cannot understand why you would publish this online.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/11/2021
Amazing how you're so good at criticizing... yet this piece of shit doesn't show anything but your inability to actually make an effort to writing a good story.
scribblingbubbles chapter 1 . 10/2/2021
Hey bro guess what? Your story is amazingly...shitty compared to your criticism ability. Go to literature school if u want to be snotty to others bub.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/30/2021
Damn, seems really cringe ngl. Also this seems like a Mary sue self insert more than anything.
Kamijou Touma1 chapter 1 . 8/2/2021
Trash and garbage story by a garbage author
Simplyhiccstrid chapter 1 . 5/22/2020
Please continue this!
JustManySue chapter 1 . 11/4/2019
that is a good start !
but I'm worried that the story will become out of control.
like a jackSue, you konw ?