Reviews for Third Time's the Charm |
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![]() ![]() She loans out 100,000 without another thought and medical treatments cost hundreds of thousands, but a big score is 100,000 or a million, author has no economic sense at all |
![]() ![]() Tanya purposely made her army career as generalist as possible she would never by any stretch of the imagination take a min-max item that has such a downside |
![]() ![]() ![]() ... i nwver though of that. tanya is ironically devoted lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Technically Being X violated the rules first and confirmed a second time with the button to break them and he has hidden the files for Tanya while Aqua was only acting as usual since the system shouldn't bring someone out of Earth xmaybe only problem is that she didn't verify the artifact but it's being X fault for granting an artifact lol that goes to tanya even after dying. But yeah Aqua did nothing wrong here especially since the boss was supposed to manage Tanya in the first place, it was his responsibility lmao. The fact alone that he has to confirm alone is enough to make him guilty lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a hell of a catchup session to read. Been updating pretty consistently for going on 6 years huh? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed the first chapter of your story. The world-building and character development are well-done, and I see a lot of potential for where the story could go. I particularly liked Tanya's internal struggles and the tension with Aqua. I look forward to seeing how Tanya's choice will impact the story, I have an idea for your story and would love to collaborate with you. Great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I mean, it's really well-written, but it's bullshit that Tanya and Viktorya can just get away with being complete pieces of shit and not be beaten senseless for it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, this story is dogshit. I'm out. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'd kill these bitches. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story has just devolved into talking about paperwork and boring businesses, not much adventuring or action anymore. It's become dull. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i mean, it's written well, but it feels like the fight was all for nothing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So Tanya didn't even kill the greater demon. Well this chapter is fucking crap. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why hasn't she gotten the thing to change her gender yet? |