Reviews for Raven |
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![]() ![]() ![]() the thing that annoys me is that harry needs to realise that Wanda isnt Daphne, he's said he's seen people that look like people from his world before so he should know that it isnt her |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked the story, but I'm not sure I like the end... I liked the version of Scarlet Witch in Dr Strange - Into the Multiverse... Okay. My bad... This story is before that story... Cut me some slack... I'm 73... and it's past my bedtime... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I read and reread fanfics a lot. In yours, I've noticed the same spelling and grammatical errors throughout them. I'm not complaining about those errors, BTW, but they do seem to suggest that you aren't copying stories like the reviewer said. |
![]() ![]() "Oh yeah, I remember you now" Harry smiled "though you look different from the last time I saw you...must be the hair" Lmao i just caught that |
![]() ![]() ![]() It’s so infuriating that the author can’t decide whether Harry is a very strong magician who can defeat anything and everything, or whether he’s a loser who can be captured by a drunken Valkyrie and a couple of alien homeless people into slavery. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It seems like a good story, but the “jumping” narrative rarely benefits the book. This one is no exception. Moreover, useless and uninteresting flashbacks get on your nerves. By skipping them, you lose neither the threads of the story nor the understanding of the hero. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn, I was not ready for the Cameo. Brought tears to my eyes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think he should have been stuck in space for a while |
![]() ![]() good story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great job! Oh, btw, the sandy one is "desert". The sweet one is "dessert". The easiest way to keep them straight, imo, is remembering you might want seconds of "dessert" (hence the two ss) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nope! Not upset at all. Great decision to NOT include the Black Widow movie. |
![]() ![]() ![]() When the Accords came up, I just wanted the Avengers to say 'Okay' and retire to Asgard. Let the politicians clean up their own messes. I would LOVE to see them try to invade Asgard to 'reclaim their assets'. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Btw its not "me, thor, and loki" its "thor, loki, and I" |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your making fury sound like a pervy old man |
![]() ![]() ![]() Two years later, I’m going to say a couple things. First, fuck the haters. Great story. Second, love the way you made Harry’s powers, along with the fact that you ACTUALLY finished the story. Many HP/Avengers don’t get finished. So thank you, and good job. |