|Reviews for Raven|
| mystpurge chapter 29 . 11/22
the thing that annoys me is that harry needs to realise that Wanda isnt Daphne, he's said he's seen people that look like people from his world before so he should know that it isnt her
| jaqmaq77 chapter 54 . 11/14
I liked the story, but I'm not sure I like the end... I liked the version of Scarlet Witch in Dr Strange - Into the Multiverse...
Okay. My bad... This story is before that story... Cut me some slack... I'm 73... and it's past my bedtime...
| RipBudAce chapter 23 . 10/20
I read and reread fanfics a lot. In yours, I've noticed the same spelling and grammatical errors throughout them. I'm not complaining about those errors, BTW, but they do seem to suggest that you aren't copying stories like the reviewer said.
| Guest chapter 16 . 10/7
"Oh yeah, I remember you now" Harry smiled "though you look different from the last time I saw you...must be the hair"
Lmao i just caught that
| Sahamosveb chapter 48 . 10/4
It’s so infuriating that the author can’t decide whether Harry is a very strong magician who can defeat anything and everything, or whether he’s a loser who can be captured by a drunken Valkyrie and a couple of alien homeless people into slavery.
| Sahamosveb chapter 19 . 10/3
It seems like a good story, but the “jumping” narrative rarely benefits the book. This one is no exception. Moreover, useless and uninteresting flashbacks get on your nerves. By skipping them, you lose neither the threads of the story nor the understanding of the hero.
| Aeryun chapter 52 . 9/17
Damn, I was not ready for the Cameo. Brought tears to my eyes.
| Foolgod chapter 14 . 8/28
I think he should have been stuck in space for a while
| Guest chapter 54 . 8/21
| BarbedCaress chapter 41 . 8/6
Oh, btw, the sandy one is "desert". The sweet one is "dessert".
The easiest way to keep them straight, imo, is remembering you might want seconds of "dessert" (hence the two ss)
| BarbedCaress chapter 38 . 8/6
Not upset at all.
Great decision to NOT include the Black Widow movie.
| BarbedCaress chapter 37 . 8/6
When the Accords came up, I just wanted the Avengers to say 'Okay' and retire to Asgard.
Let the politicians clean up their own messes.
I would LOVE to see them try to invade Asgard to 'reclaim their assets'.
| midnightscar17 chapter 54 . 8/5
Btw its not "me, thor, and loki" its "thor, loki, and I"
| midnightscar17 chapter 34 . 8/5
Your making fury sound like a pervy old man
| marcusvalor1701 chapter 54 . 7/30
Two years later, I’m going to say a couple things.
First, fuck the haters. Great story.
Second, love the way you made Harry’s powers, along with the fact that you ACTUALLY finished the story. Many HP/Avengers don’t get finished. So thank you, and good job.