Reviews for An Orthodox Mountain |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I hope this updates at some point. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Honestly, I'd love for this story to continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not really enough to judge yet, but right now I'd like to see more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very interesting read, i hope you update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Strun Bah Qo! |
![]() ![]() Nice meme |
![]() ![]() fuck you cunt don't read |
![]() ![]() ![]() HAHAHHAHA the Skyrim reference got me, haha can't wait for more of this story keep ok keeping on! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's painful to know I'll likely have to wait quite a while for an update :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() I do so love this so far. Make me more please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A really nice start. We didn't really develop an emotional attachment, but it was written well enough that it still had some impact. |
![]() ![]() huh writing style was fine when your just informing readers about the past, but its not very descriptive and readers like an unending train of thought from someone with ADHD. At best your still just TELLING whats happening. That works for essays and book reports but its not meant for anything else! No successful author does this. It can be used! Very briefly and in small doses. Not for an a entire chapter/story. This is essentially no better then a quick script. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Those last few lines there have told me I'll like this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good Work...! 1 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great |