Reviews for An Orthodox Mountain
lordoftentacle chapter 3 . 1/29
I hope this updates at some point.
Repenexus chapter 3 . 8/30/2021
Honestly, I'd love for this story to continue
Tony McNucklz chapter 3 . 3/25/2021
Not really enough to judge yet, but right now I'd like to see more.
Autistic Weaboo chapter 3 . 10/9/2020
Very interesting read, i hope you update soon
VtrCst chapter 2 . 9/25/2020
Strun Bah Qo!
Moi chapter 2 . 7/15/2020
Nice meme
Guest chapter 1 . 6/22/2020
fuck you cunt don't read
shaysa123 chapter 2 . 4/26/2020
HAHAHHAHA the Skyrim reference got me, haha can't wait for more of this story keep ok keeping on!
Linarian chapter 3 . 3/22/2020
It's painful to know I'll likely have to wait quite a while for an update :(
MystiYew chapter 3 . 3/4/2020
I do so love this so far. Make me more please.
MystiYew chapter 1 . 3/4/2020
A really nice start. We didn't really develop an emotional attachment, but it was written well enough that it still had some impact.
Guest chapter 3 . 3/4/2020
huh writing style was fine when your just informing readers about the past, but its not very descriptive and readers like an unending train of thought from someone with ADHD. At best your still just TELLING whats happening. That works for essays and book reports but its not meant for anything else! No successful author does this. It can be used! Very briefly and in small doses. Not for an a entire chapter/story. This is essentially no better then a quick script.
ragnarok042501 chapter 2 . 3/2/2020
Those last few lines there have told me I'll like this story.
Lifelessman chapter 1 . 2/26/2020
Good Work...! 1
PasiveNox chapter 3 . 1/21/2020
Great
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