Wait, was she in Sphinx? The Honor Harrington Sphinx? With the Hexapuma Death Claws?
Can she get back?

Where is the version with the Crossover?

I kinda want to see him in Warhammer 40K and having to fight too hard to get up to any shit...

So much for her restrictions to her right eye mangekyou.

1). Shes only supposed to be able to summon 1 at a time

2). She can only do it once every 8 hours (this was stated explicitly)

3) the spectres come from the Pure lands. Since Minato is sealed within the Shinigami’s stomach and thus not in the Pure lands, he cannot be summoned.

why didnt they exchange eyes

Wow, a Konoha Uchiha fic, real original. Made worse by the fact that you gave other interesting options, but of course it's Konoha and of course it's the Uchiha.

I think the genins level in this chapter are a bit too high. I ember when she first got her genin team, she said that level like 7-8 was experienced genin or something. Either way, the genin had been out in war, already doing missions, and were only like level 8 max. These giys are outs the academy, havent dine anything. Should be like 5 at most

Kunai are like the only weapons we really see used throughout the series by the top people. No one really uses swords besides orochimaru’s and the seven swordsmen. Kunai are much more versatile (lookin at you minato)

What nooo they were so cute together….

The shadow clone thing reminds of of a story were Naruto got betrothed to 3 ninja from other villages on accident from his father. Eventually 4 when kiri realized what was going on. . . . Lol. Betrothed not necessarily engaged.

People don't like starcraft? Pttt, thats nonsense! Nonsense! She could have some real fun there. Yeah she kind of murdered canon. But if she didn't at least in some way then I wouldn't really be interested. If I wanted to read canon ill watch the show or read the manga.

This is the most dumbest shit I've ever read. Seriously, WTF was the purpose for this chapter? Just antagonize the character out of the blue because It's so 'lucky' for her? This chapter ruined any potential the fic had because now the readers would be less invested in the character in the fear of her getting fucked sideways out of the blue. Why would anyone take your character seriously if you can just fuck them over because you felt like it?

Chakra monster, dissillusioned, inner peace and even perhaphs the summoner perks were the only really useful one that gave something she might not be able to get as easily without them, the fuinjutsu one is ok considering she's not an uzumaki but you're most likely gonna blow that one out of proportion, and the genjutsu on makes her genjutsu harder to break in addition to increase genjutsu talent the medic nin one is learnable so pretty stupid all things considered, if you gave it something like "will give more and more modern medical and bio engineering knowledge as you progress, the most advanced being from(mass effect or halo or something)" then it would work as an actual perk for a gamer or you shouldn't have made the useful ones that she didn't chose

Hi, is that rewrite still in the plans?

I hesitate to start a story when even the author think parts of it sucks and need to be rewritten. :-)

Hmm. Wasnt she trying to hide her ability from the anbu a se ind ago? Then she literally goes and tells all about her ability

Yeah. Shes pathetic