Neroon the sex god... ok, I hadn't thought of thay before. Anyway, great start, I'd really like to see more. And stories outlining the universe are probably more... important? Interesting? Than those based on the main chars...

What happends, what happens, Man leaving one hanging in the air is torture :)

Great story so far, can't wait for the next chapters, and to see if she survives the test, if I got it right, lost the plot a few times in reading it, but I got back on track..

Great work.

Shane

P.S No Anonumuss people can give reviews better turn on the fuction if you want, other revies :)