|Reviews for Child of Darkness, Child of Light|
| vanity p chapter 1 . 4/21/2012
sorry, i didnt know i could leave a comment, and so now im going nuts,
why dont you add a story behind the first days of their put in how kall-sue came into the picture.. and how about having kall having his heart broken by one of d.s.'s X's? and how arshes conforts him as a sister and how some one tries to kill arshes or...how probly how kall tries to kill arshes unintensionaly,and...well mis silver spider,i'm sue kall sue went through some pretty f-ked up stuff when he was younger,and not to mension your other fics...try adding some of those ideas together...i love your fics cuz there very seieous.i whant to see more.
| boally chapter 1 . 12/19/2005
I think that's an awsome poem..I don't really know thw show so i couldn't tell u an ending but i really hope u get one soon...UPDATE PLZ
| Deer chapter 1 . 8/17/2004
I think this was a good start! Very good indeed. It describes Arshes' feelings so well, being abandoned and accepted nowhere... Actually this was very good just like this, and it didn't need anything more. I like it!
| Fritz D chapter 1 . 6/1/2003
Cool poem, i think the author should keep it like that and let the reader think of the end themselves.