damn now I got to wait for the next chapter. this is how you keep someone on the hook and waiting.

fine chapter, and great use of Shirou

I love how you wrote this story. Keep up the good work!

Esta historia sera shirouxatla?

Nice

the story continues, too interesting, beautiful, sublime, to leave it hanging

Here we go people! This has been a wild ride so far, I truly look forward to how things grow from here on out, also with mastering the companion shields I suspect the slave owners shield will be rendered obsolete.

Of course shirou learning his basic made rafy skills will be useful, especially if he learns to make unlimited blade works.

thanks for the chapter

12-year-old Shirou... So this was when he was still adorkadorbz and before he transformed to drool-worthy hotness.

To sssweety:

That's what I'm wondering myself. Shirou could have easily projected Caster's Noble Phantasm Rule Breaker and break the slave seal. I suspect Rule Breaker could even reverse or undo whatever magic that turned him into a demi-human when he got yanked to this world and return his body back to his original human form.

This iteration of Shirou is straight up, a "dead fish"...no presence in this story at all and I still have that issue with him being a slave and acting like it's no big deal.

As nice as this story is, I'm gonna have to agree with all the previous reviews stating that Shirou isn't impacting the story as much and that it's more of a retread with a second beginning slave than a crossover.

I like this story but, this feels very much like a Canon retread. This really needs some interesting divergence, there is a number of interesting things that can be done with Shirou added but so far he might as well as been a boring OC for all the change he has caused.

I like this I really do but, it could be a lot more.

First and biggest problem shirou would simply summon rulebreaker and break the slave contract
2nd shirou isnt a racoon hes a lone wolf or perhaps a fierce tiger

Thank you for your hardwork. this is good story,

Those status effect bottles are a great idea. Is there a poison bottle, or maybe one that acts like a bomb? And why hasn't he toss these things into his shield?

It's not bad as a start, it will be interesting to read but I have to ask.. you know that Shirou have Caster's Noble Phantasm Break Ruler right? He can cancel the slave seal when he wants so.. why didn't he?