super cute but dang Hiashi you can't just kidnap peoples kids to fight your kids

Interesting fic so far. I like that you're not sticking to Canon. You could use a beta, but the plot and characters are good. Looking forward to more.

Not trying to be a grammar nazi. But in the story summary you should put died, not dead.

SUPER FINALLY UPDATE! I WAS VERY ANXIOUS SINCE YEAR SO THAT YOU WILL UPDATE I HOPE YOU HAVE READ MY PRIVATE MESSAGES BUT HERE IS WHAT I WRITTEN IN CASE:
HELLO HOW TO WRITE THE PREVIOUS TIME I LOVE THE SAKURAXSASUKE AS THE VEGETAXBULMA OR IRIEXKOTOKO GIRL SUPER EMOTIONAL AND ANTISOCIAL COLD BOY SEEMS INTERESTING, AND I ALSO LIKE THE NARUTOXHINATA THAT I LIKE TO THROUGH THROUGH THE SOMETIME .

I HAVE A CONCEPT BUT VERY VAGO BUT I WOULD LOVE TO SEE IT LOOK:
SASUKE LESS THAN LITTLE PRACTICE IN THE TRAINING FIELDS NEAR THE KONOHA FOREST AND CASUALLY SEE THE GUARIDA DE SAKURA AND SEE IT SOMETHING INCREDIBLE (FUINJUTSU) AND DECIDE TO APPROACH AND SO SUCCESSIVELY MEETS ITACHI.
WHO SEE SAKURA SOMEONE VERY CURIOUS AS BEING SMALL AND YOUNG KNOWS FUINJUTSU AND KNOWLEDGE OF HERVES AND SASUKE COMES TO TELL HER PARENTS CAUSING GOOD PERSPECTIVE OF HER.

GOOD THAT SUCH I HOPE YOU USE MY CONCEPT (I LOVE SAKURA BUT THE SAME KISHIMOTO SAID THAT THE FEMALE CONCEPTS WAS NOT GIVEN WELL AS HIS JUDGMENT WAS A PERFECT GIRL IN DEFINITIVE DID NOT HAVE A LOT OF FRIENDLY FRIEND YOUR CREATION) ... :) :) :)

¡super interesting story apparently if I'm honest i like sakura, just kishimoto is not good with female characters he confirmed it so she just did not give much prominence
I support you in this story I will be waiting for the next chapter ... :) :) :)