Reviews for Maelstrom Batman Beyond
jacke44 chapter 7 . 8/28
hope to see a new ch soon
Borello chapter 7 . 6/13
the story is good and really interesting. i hope to read more chapter.
Turboranger chapter 1 . 5/19
And don't you motherfucking bloody asshooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooole forget about lucifuge dragon
mikatamo chapter 7 . 5/7
I like your story but if I have to say that the harem you plan to do is too big, you need to low that number down so that can be easy to hand while writing, or not soon or later you will get writers' block and the story becomes bad and not good as now
Haruka Azuno chapter 7 . 5/1
Please Update soon?
Blackholelord chapter 7 . 2/11
So the harem. I have to say that this is rather big. More love and all that, and Naruto does need love, but I have seen similar ideas and they tend to implode as writers tend to begin struggling to have all the girls interact in the story without sounding like Mary Sues, other times plain forget about them until a reader brings it up. I rather like your story, and hope it continues to the end. This big can be a killer, before you consider this idea, think how are you going to get all the girls to interact in something this massive, but the only way I can see is if the girls are not all in town at once, allowing their interaction be more controlled.
R-king 93 chapter 7 . 2/11
Awesome chapter
Shadow chapter 7 . 2/10
Loved it! Can't wait for the next chapter!
tiger9868 chapter 7 . 2/11
please update
Spiral-Voltron-Zero0Q1 chapter 7 . 2/10
So freaking awesome!
MAKE MORE!
Hotstreak's crossover stories chapter 7 . 2/10
Amazing
demon87 chapter 7 . 2/10
very super
HyperA2019 chapter 7 . 2/10
I am looking fowards to Chapter 8 and it be interesting Naruto meet former members of Teen Titans.
SPark681 chapter 7 . 2/9
Hmm, a nice chapter seems Naruto has more girls interested in him anyways keep up the great work!
monsterkillers124 chapter 3 . 2/9
also reflection was another words misspelled as well
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