Would love for Tock to be the assassin. Would also love to see Ciel or May get in on the action as well.

Hi loved the fic and i hope you can continue the story someday!

Well, damn. That bunny just got cooked.
All joking aside, this is my other favorite crack ship of Jaune's- and I just noticed that this has fifteen more chapters!
Well, I have some reading to do.

Damn. We're really leaving off on Ilia about to make such a terrible mistake huh? That's such a shame.

Great story

I absolutely love this story so much. It is so amazing to see actual genuine Polyamorous relationships here. It isn’t like Jaune is some perfect god amongst men he is just him self and surrounded by people that love him and everyone else.

While I know this is a mainly smut story I would love to see a part soon where Jaune gets these Anxieties he has out and talks with everyone in the Polycule. Communication is so important and I would love to see what every individual person in the relationship wants from it.

Really sad this fic died out, it was really fun to read and I really would love to see everyone's reaction to them going public.

I know this story is already published, but i say this to Qrow: Whine, whine, whine! You're just jealous that Jaune can do with Pyrrha and Velvet that Taiyang did years ago with your twin sister and the girl you obviously had a crush on. There's a reason you have two nieces that are half siblings. Maybe instead of threatening Arc about bodily harm, take some pointers. Can't help Ruby and Yang may be interested in Jaune too, but that's TBD.

Man, I clicked on this story because lewd, but it's been a fantastic journey on the EPITOME of true polygamy in fiction.

RWBY has always been one of the top settings for something beyond the normal and rote "harem" settings imo (alongside DxD and possibly Campione), because Remnant is a Death World that makes Earth look like space Canada rather than Space Australia.

When you add emotion-eaters like Grimm to the picture, then of course poly relationships would be practically encouraged, especially amongst Huntsmen and Huntresses. Because there isn't a single reason I could think of that you'd want LESS superhero/supersoldier babies popping out each year. And so, you'd have an inverse of the Harry Potter Wizarding World, where your average Muggle is given Dare To Be Badass propaganda, in hopes that they'd get their Aura activated, become a Huntsman, have kids, and help teach THEM to be even more badass. Because a single Huntsman might be able to protect ten or a hundred civilians, but a hundred Huntsmen could be able to protect 10k or a million. Which is why I'll always, ALWAYS laugh in anyone's face of they try and tell me that Remnant would have laws about who or how many you can marry, and why my headcannon is that Tai/Raven/Summer was a canon OT3 and Summer only died because she tried to take on a many missions as normal, but without Raven's backup.

So saying, if there was one scene I'd love to see, it's a "Halloween" orgy celebrating Ruby's birthday, and Ruby's eyes flashing from the pure joy, accidentally (and unknowingly) stopping an assassination attempt using murder-by-Grimm (With the characters not realizing until much later that Ruby's eyes only flash when feeling love and protectiveness in proximity to Grimm).

This was hot af

im hoping he fucks raven into her place as well

- Talks
Well, Team RWBY will be hitting the depths of depravity by the looks of thing with Yang the most vanilla.

- Renora
Was that a "One Piece" reference with the pirates?

- Dream Voice
Hmm..

Parental one mayhaps?

Considering they're supposedly traditionalists, which further explains why Saffron lives in Argus with her wife.

- Reveal
Yeah, as much trouble as the Poly thing may cause, it will help cut down on the Paparazzi digging and making things worse.

Weiss will be another issue due to her name and status though.

Not sure they could handle the scandal. Pyrrha herself may not be able to handle the scandal, considering what sponsors are like.

- Ilia
Yeah, that's another mess waiting to happen.

Unhappy Cinder, unhappy Neo, unhappy Blake, furious Pyrrha.

*shakes head*

It's what you get when people refuse to communicate and just jump to conclusions.

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Corrections:
*... there's was a hard lot, ...*

"theirs" rather than "there's".

- Winter
*shakes head*

I can sympathize. She and Qrow seem like a variation of Taiyang and Raven, bad for each other, but keep being drawn together anyway.

Suspect that Qrow will end up wanting him even more dead, if Weiss does set up Winter with Jaune.

- Mike drop
And Penny makes a mess of things. *face palms*

There's going to be fallout on that one, that's for sure.

Hopefully her agent will be on the ball enough to neutralize it. Arkos already in a relationship, but trying to keep it low key to avoid the paparazzi, only for another Huntress to fall for him and her friend to misinterpret things and then do something stupid.

Maybe ask if this is what Atlasian tax money is being spent on, the interpersonal relationships of late teens?

Bit mean as it means Penny is going to get hit with a lot of restrictions, BUT she REALLY goofed on this one and opened up a lot of trouble for our intrepid duo.

Plus ruined Pyrrha's planned outing with Velvet.

- Arslan
Again an interesting take on her. Definitely leaves room for her to be seduced by Arkos in the future.

Bit like a Weiss and a Coco mix.

- Ruby
What is it with Jaune that it drives the girls around him to try and outdo each other as the kinkiest little bitch around?

*shakes head*

Well, least he can somewhat repel Qrow by honestly stating that Ruby is still a virgin and that if Ruby was sad, it's because he Jaune had to reject her due to Qrow's threats.

And if Qrow is still upset pointing out the hypocrisy. "Sleep with my niece and I'll torture you to death" as well as "Don't make my niece cry or I'll torture you to death".

But rejecting her would always lead to her crying, so decree 1 and 2 are mutually exclusive. So what does he want? As sticking Jaune in a no win situation like that is simply asinine, insane and unworkable.

And how does he think Ruby would react to knowing she got shot down because of her uncle?

Extra helpful if Ruby is right there, looking at him (as she knows his tells for when he's lying).

Ought to further ensure that he backs off.

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Corrections:
*I would like that to,"*

"too".

- Taiyang
Well, this does further explain why he doesn't want to talk about Raven to Yang.

Still.. Soulmate?
What was Summer then?
A fling?

She helps him through his depression of Raven leaving. She helps raise their daughter, then gives him one that's theirs as well.

She dies and he's in deoressionville again.

You'd think the latter would indicate deeper feelings.

*shakes head*

Still, Yang, as unconventional as it is, is making better choices than her elders in this regard. Far more respect, affection and support that's for certain.

*shrugs*

- Nicknames
*scratches head*
Okay does she or does she not hate that nickname?

Because she seemed to hate it when Jaune used it, yet loved it when Neptune did.

Figured it was the person saying it that mattered, but her reaction to Blake and Yang seems to nix that.

Tsunderes. I'll never get them.

- Realization
Okay, how is it Jaune's fault that Ruby is crushing on him?

That would be like blaming Blake that Sun was into her.

Plus, that deliberately missed message from dad.. And with Qrow near them and Raven eager to blab.

This has Charlie Foxtrot written all over it.

And of course if Pyrrha finds out that Yang dropped the ball.. Well.. Repeat of the Roman/Neo scene isn't unfeasible.

*shakes head*

Oy Ve..

- Reaction
And it was Ruby who ended up blowing a fuse. Somewhat understandable.

Even if the chain of events rather clears Jaune of any wrong doing. As Yang was the last addition, not the first after Pyrrha as she seems to think and it was Weiss who instigated that.

Rather makes a difference.

She's also overlooking (understandable as she's not thinking straight due to anger) how clueless Jaune is, unless one is very blatant about it. (Like she was doing now).

That means her anger should be directed towards her teammates for making a move on a guy she likes.

(Although, I think that Blake just predated the obvious signs of her crush on Jaune. So she can only be blamed for keeping it a secret. Rather than breaking the female equivalent of the Bro-Code. Weiss and Yang though. Yeah, different story there.)

*shrugs*

Least that's my read on the situation anyway.

- Meetings
Well... That went better than expected. Both the agent thing (although she still only knows of Jaune) and meeting the future in-laws.

But it still always surprises me that when his friends meet his sister, why none of them ask the obvious question. How do two lesbians have a son? Especially as the tyke clearly takes after Terra in looks.

Yes, an invasive question, but even a thought would've been enough really.

Especially with you presenting Momma Arc as a traditionalist with regards to Vale and Mistral.

So why would she recognize Adrian as her grandson, if they used a local Argusian/Mistralian donor, if there were no blood ties?

To quote a song by "the Music Factory": "Things that make you go hmmm."

- Indecision
I think you handled that quite well. It's a dilemma I've heard enough female acquaintances express.

On the one hand wanting a career, on the other (if the relationship is solid enough) thinking about the potential of having kids.

The latter tend to get postponed due to financial reasons these days. But the quandary is definitely there.

Being in a triad as they are, they have a bit more leeway in finances, considering what Pyrrha brings to the table, BUT her field is also very fickle, especially considering how unconventional their relationship is.

A backlash with her sponsors is almost inevitable, considering the celebrity life.

And there's also the political side with Vale and Mistral to consider or that's a human-faunus interracial relationship.

Let alone any of the other girls' involvement.

*shrugs*

Still, the rotation choice is a sensible one. Also and this is more of a darker point, being in a poly relationship does have an advantage considering the mortality rate in their profession. Their children will have at least one parent left and the second partner will be instrumental in keeping the other from falling into a depression like Taiyang did and which nearly cost Yang and Ruby their lives.

So that's yet another factor to consider.

- Home life
Sounds about right for Pyrrha, would further explain why her likely mother was so shook up in canon.

Regrets. Things she should've said or done, but didn't due to being too busy. Thinking she could do so later, only to end up with the situation that there was no later, due to her death.

Her old man? Either didn't care or decided to bury himself further in work, either way I don't think her parents marriage would survive long after her passing.

*shrugs*

- Plans
*face palm*
Ruby's naïveté and Penny's cluelessness are really shining true.

No matter how she twists it, if Jaune were in a conventional relationship, than she'd be trying to get him to cheat on his GF.

Lucky for her he's not in a conventional relationship. Although it does render Pyrrha and Velvet's decision to clue him in when back at Beacon kinda moot.

Really should've just sent him a videochat request and told him. As these types of things tend to go kabloey if left alone for too long.