"...Surprisingly happy nature of Death," made Albus feel less lonely. Fantastic.
I'm still viewing Albus as an old man de-aged and recoloured (hair), so the knowledge of "many of his old tricks he would no longer be able to get away with" was a bit disturbing.

Oh dear. Oh DEAR.

I really really really truly enjoyed reading this! It was a fantastic ride. Pray continue it whenever you have the time and motivation. Bless you. D

For the sake of - Merlin's saggy - you introduce Luna. I was happy about it 'till I reached the second paragraph talking about her. Then you drop that Blue Moon analogy - Godric's-! Horribly worded - I actually had /goosebumps/ - and then you proceed to have Albus and Dracula...talk. Like dealers. Y'know, like, negotiations. Only that they were talking about the autonomy and allowing the existence of a /KINGDOM/. Oh, with Lady DEATH as an imprisoned against-her-will spectator - whose shouting profanities nobody bothers to hear. IGNORED. A literal Goddess. Of Death. Sidelined. Might I inquire why there were no tea and crumpets on the table between Albus and the Dracula?

I can't even say I'm sorry for sort of freaking out. It's warranted. It's proof of my sanity before I began reading your fic. 'Cause if you didn't lose your sanity reading /this/, it means it was already lost. Which is...not good.

My dear Harry. You do always end up in the most...improbable of places.
Magic help you.

The way Albus used that wish was /amazing/! NEVER cross Albus Dumbledore if you've ever even /thought/ of stripping children of their innocence.

I am so deeply, truly, /humbled/ by how you manage to write so many action-filled battle scenes WITHOUT BEING REPITITIVE. Revelation after revelation, new feats of magic - WITHOUT any new acquisition of artifacts OR increase in those goddamned powers. It's the true work of a genius!

I know you wrote this chapter pretty seriously, but phrases like "Lord of the Tentacles" and "The Tentacled Lord" had me cracking up every now and then. Very inappropriate, I know, but I say it's your fault.

P.S.- I promise to bother myself and give you atleast one review after logging in so you can reply if you want to.

Wonderful storyline. )

Congratulations on the engagement, new job and new place well new life haha really happy for you! :D

Yay you’re back!

So happy to see a post. Especially Ona. Website that feels like it’s crumbling apart.

Can’t wait for more chapters. Hopefully next one I’ll be able to share some ideas.

Well one thought did cross my mind… do you think the stricter god has a feeling Hadrian would be loosing that sword. He did have another one to tempt Hadrian with first only to be rejected.

Or will we have a scene where Hadrian crafts his own sword guided by Thor and the Dwarf God?

Albus has had such a glow up becoming master of death. There has been whispers in your chapter about Hadrian “assending” what could that mean? Happy to find out as you post more updates!

Happy to hear about your life journey during the break in releases, and congratulation on the Engagement!

Warm welcome back

Evergreen Sceptre

Immediadetly not liking how this looks… how long ago was this made? 2020? Cause it certainly seems to fit that time.

I got excited from the description but it seems to me this fic is out dated and full of tropes people mock and joke about nowa days.

Still love to come back to this and enjoy a rereading of it. Lovely surprise to see it had an update and well done too! looking forward to more chapters if you are willing and able good author.

alright. im just gonna day it now, but this is so fucking good. ive never really been one for OP Harry fics, but now he's fighting demons and stuff, it's not bad. i also love the thing with artefacts, sigils, and new magic branches. loving it so far, hope it continues as it is now

Hello,

I just found this story and it is incredibly well written.

I love the overpowered ness of Albus and Hadrian, I absolutely love the OCs, which is a very weird feeling, but still incredible work.

I cannot wait to see where it will head to next.

To be completely honest, I like Hadrian's storyline more, but Albus' storyline is also incredibly interesting.

I really love the concept of them both being incredibly strong, compared to normal humans, but them both not really finding it out because their enemies and friends level up alongside them.

It will be really interesting as soon as they return to Midgard and cause chaos there.

But I will really enjoy the fic until then because even the trope is a bit cliche, it is so incredibly written and interesting. And I also really like an overpowered MC sometimes.

All in all, thank you so much for writing, and I really hope you have more craziness planned for this fic!

Wonderfully done. I especially love the inclusion of Krampus and co. I
once did a reel or something about him being a magical creature!

By far the best Harry Potter fan fic ive read