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Loved this story, as well as the first one. You are a terrific writer, and these are truly masterpieces! Thank you for using your skills to contribute to this fandom :) I really liked how you took the events of Frozen II and made them your own. Adding in time between the various events of the movie really helped the pacing, and added emotional weight to their decisions and actions.

Did you have the scene of Moses parting the Red Sea in mind when you wrote this chapter? Now this story has really turned into a song of ice and fire, both magically and in terms of the characters' relationships ... (just kidding)

Thanks for the wonderful story. I think you did such a great job with Anna's despair after losing Elsa in the glacier. It was so realistic and then her fleeing to the Dark Sea after her meeting with Devil, all of it just fit so well together. Realism, timing and the other character interactions was so spot-on that it had me riveted. My only thoughts were as I noted for chapters 50-51, that you might want to rethink your sex scenes because they also reflect like something you felt you needed to insert for the reader's and it didn't really fit the flow of the story. Here you have a sister that goes through hell to get her sister, who she loves more than life (really they both do) and having gone months through terrible despair and then upon their return to the castle, it turns into a 1 hour long port fest with ice dildos shooting cum into Anna's mouth, who claims to have never done anything sexual with Kristoff, so how is she some expert at bj's now? It just seems like a serious, romantic, adventurous tale, that immediately turns into a porn flick, which just takes away from the flow of the story. If you were to bring a smut scene into it, I think the story would flow better with a slower build up to the sex scene instead of Elsa's inability to remember much, to BAM! now she is a sex goddess.
But putting the sex scene aside, I thought Elsa had stated that she had only ever thought of Anna as someone she was attracted to, even when Mother talks about her deviance Elsa never says she was attracted to women that were not her sister, but that Anna is all she has ever thought of as a potential partner, attraction, and the only one she could ever love, etc., etc., yet at Anna's coronation party it's stated how she is attracted to this woman and that woman, it just doesn't seem to match her character as portrayed in almost all of the story.
I like the gazebo at the end where Elsa asks Anna to marry her. The party is done well, I think, except for the Elsa attractions to other women, but fun characters.
(As a sidenote to Frozen, not this story, it always seems like Anna is trying to be an equal partner to Elsa, but Elsa just does whatever she wants to do without any input or okay with Anna. You see it in this story as well when Elsa announces their relationship to the public without dis using it beforehand with Anna, in fact tells Anna, not to tell anyone. Elsa is my favorite in this pairing, but her air of superiority is a bad character flaw , and I see that carry into most fan fiction stories. Just my observation, doesn't mean much in the grand sceme.)

This chapter, though fairly well written for a smut writing, seems rushed and out of place in the storyline. Here Elsa is just barely getting back memories of her love for Anna and fighting the exposed deviance label put upon it and within a relatively short period of time, she comes to term with her feelings for Anna, becomes a dojinatrix almost, and is cumming down Anna's throat! It just seems like too many things crammed into one chapter so they wouldn't have to be written out over time as it would make more sense in the storyline. I like the rest of the story, but the latter part of chapter 50 and this chapter feel rushed, crammed, and misplaced.

This was a story that I’ll be rereading a few more times, it was that great. Both stories were that amazing, I hope there will be a third, this deserves it.

beautiful

I really enjoyed this story and I'm so happy anna and elsa got their happy ending and wish to stay together forever and ever. I was so surprised about rynn and king arther and very happy for them. I like the mixed characters you put in this like sorey and rose from tales of zestiria and maxwell which I think is from another game I like to watch. Devil was some villian I tell ya and I liked how you decribed the spirits it was a interesting ride.
Thanks author for a lovely fanfic!

Oh my god, I can't believe this is the end… I've been reading this story since the first chapter and how time flies! I'm really sorry this review is so late because I didn't have time to write it until now.

This chapter started with a memory of Elsa's coronation, which really immediately reminded me of that sweet and painful time. I initially appreciated Elsa's idea of "one thing at a time", so when I saw Elsa recounting some of her previous anxieties at the party, I thought she would take her time in dealing with them. But when I really saw Elsa declare her unusual intimate relationship with her sister with a loving kiss in front of the crowd, resolving everything once and for all, I was very impressed and pleased with such a straightforward act of true love. As Elsa said, "Arendelle will change forever", I sincerely hope that Arendelle residents will finally accept such an uncommon relationship.

As for my long-awaited heir issue, I would actually like to know more details, such as the story about Arthuria and Rynn. Seeing the kind of motherhood Anna showed when dealing with baby Avalyn, I would love to see the sisters' preparation and sweet interaction with their child. More importantly because I believe you who have already experienced this can write this part in a way that is realistic and appropriate for the two characters, and in the end can fulfill some of the reader's fantasies about the sisters' child. I expected Devil to show up, but I didn't expect him to have such a close interaction with Elsa. His approval of the sisters' relationship and his willingness to help really meant a lot!

'I would much rather a queen - and that queen shall be the ray of sunshine that has been my everything since the day she was born.'I love this line, Anna's birth brought a brighter sunshine to Elsa's life than ever before. Whether the sisters are like the sun and the moon or fire and ice, I hope they could hold each other's hands tightly as the unprecedented two queens and move forward together!

'Are you ready?' I almost cried when I first saw this line in the chapter, after all, when I saw the title Eclipsed Hearts I felt like the story was really going to end, but I wasn't ready for it. Especially after reading the proposal at the end of the chapter for the first time, I couldn't quite believe it when I saw the "THE END" at the end. But now I'm reading the chapter again and remembering that after the incredible journey the two sisters went through, both of them have matured a lot, and the obstacles between them have been completely removed. I saw the eclipse of the sun and the moon, but now it doesn't look like there's any angst anymore. So maybe it's indeed time to say goodbye to them T_T

There are many very touching sentences in your story, just like the ones I mentioned earlier! Although this story has ended, I will always be grateful for the wonderful feeling your words brought me. It was a blessing to get to know you because of such a amazing story. And, I'm also glad to have made many new friends here. Finally, I wish you the greatest success on your writing_

BTW, I noticed that baby Avalynn was almost five months old, so I wanted to sort out the whole timeline of the story and the emotional development between the sisters. Throughout the Thawing Heart or Eclipsing Heart stories, I'm a little curious as to how long the entire time span of these two stories is for the sisters in your plan. Like now Eclipsing Heart's last chapter is about how long has passed since the Great Thaw in the Frozen1. I started reading the story "Thawing Heart" at the beginning of last year, and now after reading your stories, I have a deeper understanding of the two characters Elsa and Anna, and a stronger feeling for their romantic relationship. Even now I'm very impressed that your stories always remind me from time to time of the characters in the movie and why I love them so much. If you don't plan to write about the sisters again in the future, as a reader I'd like to know more about your perspective on the sisters, so any chance I get to see you write some passages or do a quick video about some of the feelings you've had in your writing over the years. In fact, I personally would prefer to see some more epilogues of this story in the future, I wonder if you have such plan or do you plan to leave it to the reader's imagination?

I have been stuck on a horrible deadline in the past few days. Hours ago, I finally had time to have a rest and read the very last chapter of the story with focused attention.

I laughed several times when I read it. The characters you created are so cute! It is a good chapter to say goodbye to all of them. Particularly, the father-daughter/son relationship in this story is interesting. I wonder which pair got along the best: Elsa-Devil, Elsa-Agnarr, or Agnarr-Runeard? At least, I'll say, the relationship between Elsa and Devil looks equal.

The presence of King Arthur, Rynn and their child was a good trigger point for Elsa's mind shift. Yes, sometimes you can be enlightened a lot by your peer friends. The pair of Fate couple did set examples for Elsanna several times. Moreover, I can imagine that it would be difficult for Elsa to say "no" to Anna after she saw how Anna acted to the baby. Who could?

The wedding...I mean, the coronation party was gorgeous, the ring was gorgeous, and Elsa's proposal was gorgeous. However, I felt the word "marry" seems rather "light" for the relationship. Obviously, they would love each other and stay together even if there weren't a marriage. Their relationship, the romantic and love between them, had surpassed most forms of marriage in the world. But still, it was a good chance to announce what they had to the world.:)

Writing is a lonely journey. Congratulations for completing your journey of Eclipsing Heart, and probably the stories of Elsanna...T T (hope you were not lonely, though.:) Thank you so much for your classical works, they offered me the precious opportunity to make friends with so many interesting people (and witnessed some of them became sweet lovers ;)

Best wishes for your ongoing works, and sincerely hope you enjoy your journeys of writing!

ohh myy godd, I'm so happy for them and sad at the same time because we reached the end...
thank you for this amazinf stroyy, still I hopeaybe for epiloge just to see what will happen in the futire for these gurls and maybe a third mamber of their familt hihihi
anyway, congratz it was great

the chapter was great, thx

not trying to be mean when I ask this but. a kingdom named (snoob)!? really!? NO OFFENCE but bad made up name.

also yay! anna might get her powers back

I still hope everyone gets there memories back, in however way you plan on doing that, sorry to annoy you again with that wondering question

eagerly anticipating when the sequel will eventually come out, which I'm guessing will be sometime in the next 4 to 6 months, but NO RUSH really was just a wondering thought

I just read the last two chapters. I’ve been on vacation and had been planning to read them when I get home/when my brain functions better. Then the latest notif came in and the chapter title made me read them right away.
What I wanted to say is, it has been an amazing ride! Ups and downs (I mean real downs though, you’re atrociously good at writing those ;p)we went but I’m so honored to have witnessed their journey. The two queens system was what I wished for the original movie too though I would’ve wondered the success rate of it if it were to be implemented at the beginning of the story. But now that both of them became what they needed and wanted to be, they can finally equal their responsibilities and thrive on! Elsa proclaiming their love once again and proposing in the gazebo was a cherry on top. I could almost hear Anna’s sequel echoing the hall honestly TT. Both girls grew so much throughout the series. The world isn’t generous for their kind of relationship. But I’m confident enough to know that they can conquer any challenges so long as they’re together.
My latest concern though; will you write another elsanna fic? I can only hope you’re up for it bcs I’m gonna miss your writing and your elsanna so so much otherwise! Every notif I received made my thumb tap faster and was definitely something to look forward to. I’d die for an epilogue too but yeah, I should probably just shut up and stop asking for more like a spoiled bratSeriously, thanks a million for sharing your work again! I’m gonna reread it! x

Story was amazing, Elsa and Anna definitely deserve an happy ending after all they went through. Definitely waiting for Frozen 3 to come out. So far the movie series is 2 for 2, not many Disney movies could do that. Hopefully they could go 3 for 3.