Reviews for That Was Part of the Plan |
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alpharos.89 chapter 90 . 11/15/2024 Fyi: the story is being updated in AO3 it already has six more chapters although it was last updated in march |
maiqsmail chapter 90 . 8/2/2024 "Last updated note than 2 years ago". Oh, brother... Well, it was a fun story and worth it even unfinished, but it dragged too much in a lot of places. Which, honestly, I wouldn't really mind too much if it was finished, but instead it looks like the authors burnt out trying to cover the whole story at this level of detail and now we don't have an ending. Or even the hint of an ending. So many plots are not even unfinished, but have no hint how they would finish. Like, will Voldi even abduct Harry and return? What will be his play without his DEs? And by that time it's possible the Civil war would break out and/or the Veil will be Lifted (broken Statute of Secrecy) so what will be the stance of all major players in those circumstances? And, as I predicted, we don't even get into Yule ball in the plot in this pace! Ugh. Great story, though, following awaiting a miracle. |
maiqsmail chapter 84 . 8/1/2024 Ron? Backbone? Whaaaat? |
maiqsmail chapter 79 . 7/31/2024 Wow, the security here is even worth than at the World Cup. Most of the enforcers left before the Task and heavy hitters are incapacitated by being magically bound to sit and judge the task instead of putting fires around them. What a clasterfuck. |
maiqsmail chapter 65 . 7/30/2024 It's been however the fuck many chapters covering just the 1st task of 3wt and we're still only half way through it. Will fic cut off *before* the Yule ball at this pace? Holy fuck, that's a lot of details from numerous POVs, very ambitious. |
maiqsmail chapter 37 . 7/27/2024 Ahahah, you have pages of inner monologue in one place and then your whole sex scene is just a one liner "fade to black". What gives? |
maiqsmail chapter 33 . 7/26/2024 Please don't go into real life politics in author's note. Also, I support JKR. |
maiqsmail chapter 28 . 7/26/2024 This is the most brilliantly insane "selection of champions at 3wt" scene ever. Barefoot Sirius was a nice touch. |
maiqsmail chapter 18 . 7/25/2024 Bloody brilliant and effective strategy, just put all Marked under the Unbreakable bow not to actively serve Riddle and call it a day. How come I haven't seen it in other stories?! |
maiqsmail chapter 14 . 7/24/2024 Finally! Luna was rededicated! I want more screen time for Luna speaking The Truth! And being a friend of Lyra again! |
Gazuzin chapter 90 . 9/8/2023 Grrrreat fic, makes the wizarding World make sense, even after reading a lot of fics before, stuff like who's related to who, and the mix of muggle and magical stuff |
Guest chapter 85 . 8/29/2023 Hermione is portrayed very badly. You just feel like kicking her hard repeatedly - an absolutely wretched Hippocratic selfish bint feeling entitled and encroaching on others rights |
ErnestTheGuy chapter 90 . 8/7/2023 Sad to see this on hiatus? Abandoned? I love the depth of history you two have made for this. The world feels so real. I'm going to read everything else you two have made now |
dveth chapter 49 . 5/13/2023 This chapter is terrible. The fact that Lovegood is blatantly manipulating the public to change the rules at the last second, despite everyone having agreed on them before, should have gotten her censured or disqualified as a judge. Instead, everyone just goes along with it and gives her exactly what she wants. Not only that, Angel is told compromise is part of being a diplomat. What part of giving a blatant cheat exactly what they want is a compromise? And if the judges are going to go along with the blatant bias going on, then Durmstrang and Beauxbatons should have just public said everyone single one of their people were going to use lethal force on the Hogwarts group. It might have gotten them disqualified from the Task after the rule change, but it would have increased their schools' chances of winning since the Hogwarts champions would be dead for the rest of the tournament. It's one thing to have a character do something that proves they're untrustworthy. It's another for everyone else involved to just go along with their actions and give them what they want despite them proving to be a terrible, biased judge. |
abuduu chapter 1 . 1/6/2023 is this dead? |