Great story! Beautifully crafted and written.

I just started reading and reached the moment when Ron being a total jerk calls Hermione mudblood. What? Whatwhatwhat? I think deserves to be hexed right on the spot with Confringo. Dude, this is really interesting, so much action right from the start, that was really unexpected, I already like this story. I've read countless stories that tend to painfully and very slowly develop, monotonous descriptions with no real actions with consequences, but you are way out of control. I like it, I just hope you won't lose your fire. I shall continue reading

I love your writing :)

Absolutely loved every second of it! Love your writing and how true you stayed to their characters. There are so manny Drarry facs its hard to find wellwritten ones like this one. Ill be checking out your other stories. Keep up the writing! .

Great story

Good twists..
Keep writing as life allows

great fic

Wow. I love your version of Dumbledore. In most fanfics he just sits behind his desk. Your version actually interacts with harry. Makes him seem more like a grandfather figure. I love it!

This was SO good. The characterization was A I don't know if I've ever read a fic where I was this impressed by how the author really "got" the characters.

If it's a road sign it will be a red triangle [warning] and the sign below it specifying the particular warning, which is used for the rarer ones [common road signs have pics of the hazard, like a picture of Prongs for beware of wildlife, a pic of a car going over the edge of a quay with water below for 'look out how you park near the water you moron'] and beware of black ice is a perfectly reasonable warning sign.
There's a beware of wildlife sign in Scotland somewhere which some local wag changes as soon as it's cleaned up to be 'beware of the elephants' by painting out the stag and depicting an elephant. I like the 'heavy crosswinds' one, which is a windsock, but it looks more like 'beware of low flying trousers'

A wiggling tampon, you are killing me lolol

This was incredible! The pacing was sometimes a bit too fast, but the plot more than made up for it. Draco and Snape's mutual distrust was hilarious, especially when you consider that in other fics they're usually as thick as thieves. Harry was so believably himself here, and Ron not overly an annoying twit-which is good, since I really like him! Hermione and Draco's relationship is something I'd like to see slightly more touched upon (or, really, Draco's relationship with Muggleborns), but Harry and Draco were wonderful! Neither of them are quite sure if they're friends or not, and then they're suddenly outed. I did wonder, though-why wasn't Draco punished for being so close with Harry? I would've thought there'd be more backlash. Draco is as insensitive as ever, and Harry as conflictingly moral...

Great fic! I really enjoyed it!

Again, Awesome chapter! My favorite line, 'An impetuous Gryffindor, bits of dead monster glistening in the moonlight'; so romantic ... in a Arthurian, medieval sort of way.

You know, I always thought it would be nice if Harry and Draco as friends could end up living with a somewhat friendly Snape for a summer...not sure why but it's not happened yet in any of the hundred some fanfics I've read.

This chapter is Awesome!

Haha, people who don't drink can be incredibly clueless when it comes to understanding that drunk people are rarely fun to have around while they're sobering up...unless you know them well enough to mess with them...that can be wonderfully entertaining- although payback is the proverbial bitch.