Reviews for The Banished's Wrath |
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![]() ![]() ![]() pretty good story ! ! ! ! |
![]() ![]() That minato thing was stupid |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol not bad a few errors kinda hurt the story. That genjutsu could not over write a persons main traits or their natural will. That is why he never used it on any kage. They would fight it off. No Uzumaki would be in Kumo. They are 1 of the main attackers of the Uzumaki homelands. Any Uzumaki who would know Mito would be 55 at least this far in the timeline. That is saying they were a kid when they meet but Mito would have been in the leaf for 20 or more years. Any older Uzumaki would have died protecting their homelands and the few younger members forced to run away and live. Raikage would have set up something to get the 9 tails even if it killed Naruto. It is a tailed beast and free to take. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting and awesome so Sasgay is dead nice, can't wait for more, is Tayuya dead though, I mean Karin is one thing but Tayuya is another. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, Kimimaru surviving huh but then how did Tayuya and Sakon, nonhuman bear has appeared Minato's doomed, and Sasgay is screwed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, this was interesting like all the ranks I wonder what decision Kurenai and Hana, are in Shizune to figure out, next chapter should be interesting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, that was interesting surprised also was Hana and Kurenai just disposable I know Shizune were to be assassinated, still Danzo failed and lost Shinobi and Uzi gained there survices well I think they're going to join. Also loved Jiraiya's ass kicking honestly not a big fan of Hurwitz but oh well wonder what happens next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, damn, that was surprising at one pointing looked like he'd join Kumo then he joins Uzushiogakure, I can't wait for more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was amusing, Danzo really is a fool, he has no idea how screwed he is, poor Tsunade, still, Is a getting involved huh, cool. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, that was interesting so Sakura didn't become Tsunade's apprentice but is still trying to copy Tsunade, Kiba is on team 7 even if it was only for that mission, things are getting interesting nice harem suggestions although Koman is a surprise. |
![]() ![]() ![]() An interesting chapter, I wonder what happens next, so many things are strange right now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update this interesting story soon and will itachi join naruto?. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Onoki's Particle Style isn't actually a bloodline either you know? He learned it from the Nidaime Tsuchikage and it was stated he can teach it but you need Wind Fire and Earth chakra which is why he didn't pass it to his Granddaughter as she had water instead of Wind for her third element I believe ( I know she had at least fire and earth). Also something from a previous chapter I forgot to comment on. You said that the Biju should've known what was going on with the Jubi but I don't think any of them had actually seen the statue except for when they were being extracted otherwise they might've recognized what was going on but other than that they just assumed that humans were after their power again |
![]() ![]() ![]() since Gensai is to be the Uzukage you should make Naruto the Daimyo as a Daimyo and a Kage shouldn't really be the same person as there'd be way to much work to do plus how can you balance the role in what's best for the country vs what's best for your ninjas? |
![]() ![]() ![]() REALLY not a fan of Yugito but other than that your choices of pairings work for me |