Reviews for The Banished's Wrath
Reedz22 chapter 8 . 12/1/2021
I love it when Naruto kills a dick head Sasuke
SugamDewan chapter 8 . 12/1/2021
Interesting Chapter
Fanreader26 chapter 8 . 12/1/2021
nice fight. and I'm glad ya killed him as his arrogance was getting irritating. nothing against your writing, I just don't like Sasuke's level of ego. who gets his eyes?
and really looking forward to read what happened to Minato
dreadix chapter 5 . 11/30/2021
well gace it to chapter 5. thought it was pretty interesting but but the whole reason why danzo never using it on the hokages is because he was using it sparingly to avoid it losing to much light then going blind rendering the eye useless. not to much the eye doesn't give complete control over a person but comes close depending on how its used.

shisei's eye can implant fake memory's and make the victim think/believe idea's and or action is part of their own making unaware it's not their own will. but can't flat our control another's mind.

the wiki says danzo could use shisei's eye twice a day but avoided using it on small stuff due to the light loss.
SPBRX chapter 8 . 11/30/2021
did you miss a chapter somewhere in the middle?
SPeCTeR-ll7 chapter 8 . 11/30/2021
So wait is tayuya dead?
plums chapter 8 . 11/30/2021
This chapter was only a continuation of last chapters fighting (and there are still unresolved fights, meaning this has now extended into three consecutive chapters for the same fights). The last ten percent of this chapter was plot…. But the scenes were so ridiculously short it felt like we as readers received no payoff at all for sitting through all those fights. It actually feels like your just randomly searching naruto-wikis for as many techniques as you can to extend these fights out well past what they should be.

A battle that’s not the end of story climatic battle should not be extending into its third chapter.

Finally…. You killed someone. Sasuke is dead, yet now Indra is trying to posses Asura’s current incarnation…. Why? Just feels like an excuse for more mindfuckery in a story where you already made Danzo a Superman.
plums chapter 7 . 11/30/2021
Your fights go way too long. The story is suffering for it.

And again, Danzo feels way too competent. If he was this smart…. Controlled this many assets…. He would’ve done all this years earlier.
biginferno chapter 8 . 11/30/2021
great chapter now I wonder who's in the harem I hope Tayuya and Samui are and possibly Temari and Shizuka I could see Naruto's wives all coming from outside Konoha and all being strong kunoichi such as the 4 above or a leader such as Koyuki or girls he's met in the past such as Sasame
Autobot-Wolfsketch chapter 7 . 11/30/2021
Great chapter all the fights were good, so Sasuke was killed and Naruto has the Kurama chakra cloak now looking forward to the rest of the mindscape fight, at least Karin's alive what about Tayuya? is she either dead o knocked out hopefully just knocked out. either way looking forward to the next chapter.
ShaunTheeSheep chapter 8 . 11/30/2021
Glad to see you got the motivation to update dude! Good chapter again, try to keep em coming lol. Looking forward to see how the fight turned out and the Gaara Temari situation. Keep it up dude.
thor94 chapter 8 . 11/30/2021
good battle, but i'am kinda confused about the indra thing.
indra taken over sasuke dead body, or indra soul left the body and gone into naruto?
PraetorXyn chapter 8 . 11/30/2021
Glad to see another update for this. Good chapter, it’s so rare for a fic to be UzumakiUzushio based.
TopSpartan216 chapter 8 . 11/30/2021
Excellent chapter! I wonder what Itachi’s going to do now? Possibly join Uzu or go after Naruto in revenge? Can’t wait to read the next update.
majikss chapter 7 . 10/14/2021
gay story never resolved the fact that tsunade is still under mind control fuck you kill yourself
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