Reviews for Pokémon Best Wishes: An Alternate Story (Hilda Joins Ash)
Guest chapter 59 . 1/19
I hope ash and Hilda do end up together they make a cute couple plus it's very rare seeing them paired up together have ash ask her out on a date they definitely deserve some alone time together especially have some fun after everything they both been through and they can both use this opportunity to tell each other their feelings towards each other
ConfusedCradily chapter 1 . 11/30/2020
Oh cool. Hilda has potential already. Interested to see what you do with her.
Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 2 . 11/13/2020
Niiice! It’s always refreshing to see Team Rocket far more serious than usual! Including Meowth! Good work.
Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 1 . 11/13/2020
Good start! I like it!
rufus264 chapter 41 . 9/14/2020
Great chapter
Jeannot2978 chapter 40 . 9/7/2020
Are you thinking about shipping Ash with Hilda or do you have someone else in mind for Ash's future?
Jeannot2978 chapter 15 . 9/7/2020
I hate to point out a mistake that you made, but the 3 pan Pokemon require evolution stones to evolve into semis. Fire Stone for Pansear, Water Stone for Panpour and Leaf Stone for Pansage. That was the way it was done in all of the Black and White games. Good story otherwise.
Slycerr chapter 1 . 9/1/2020
It's bland, it feels more like reading a script than a story as there is virtually no emotion behind any action.

One part that annoyed me is that after Hilda's defeat is that she felt down, but instead of having a little character development/establishment between her and Ash, we just need to believe he cheered her up and she's great-full for it.

And honestly I stopped reading after that part because of how bad (I can't find another word for it) it was. It shows no consideration or effort to make the story actually good...
rufus264 chapter 30 . 6/29/2020
Great chapter
Guest chapter 29 . 6/22/2020
Can you have Hilda and ash end up together please they make a cute couple and it's rare there even paired up together and great job on the story so far
Jessica sucks Austin's cock chapter 1 . 5/11/2020
AshXMay rocks you moron
Guest chapter 14 . 3/8/2020
Awesome chapter as always keep up the good work and not sure when but sooner or later ash should try asking Hilda out on a date because it's obvious those two like each other and it is rare seeing Hilda and ash paring from what I've noticed
Guest chapter 8 . 1/27/2020
As good as the chapter is the one problem is that the texts are to close together can you please fix that some of your other chapters are far apart from each other and makes it easier to read so can you do that for this chapter please
rufus264 chapter 7 . 1/19/2020
Great stuff
rufus264 chapter 6 . 1/13/2020
Great chapter
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