after watching hazbin hotel i kinda pity Lucifer

oh thisbis game version not lote alright, im loving it so farid like to see how Charlie would solve this

that was actually kinda cute

I’m just imagining Henry just staring at DoomGuy hyperventilating as he shakily reaches for the lever to start pumping gas. DoomGuy probably only spared him because he’s never seen a demon have a reaction like that to him before.

I almost feel bad for the demons. ALMOST

Well the good news is...that he only use the sword and the BFG once.

Nice

P.S.

Reading some of the other reviews, I see that mlgdethpool shared a lot of the sentiments I did, and while I don't agree with the level of rudeness, I do agree with the actual content of his review.

this was great cant wait for the next one

Nah,I wanna see bad shit happens,so no problem on your side dude,you write good

There is a [REMASTERED] version of this story out, you can quit shitting on this one and go check that one out. I am more than well aware that this fic is subpar compared to other material, it was one of my earliest fics, so cut me a break.

Go check the other one out (and the sequel) and then compile your thoughts.

I didn't notice that there is this chapter. (Or you posted this or updated it)

Anyway, really wagging around a new weapon that you want to give to him is certainly like a kid seeing a chocolate bar that you want to give him. Or an uncontrollable dog with treats.

keep it

Pls keep this one up

Hello! Long time reader first time reviewer! I think that the original should remain up, i know it is a bit cringe to look back on your early work but to throw it away? How would you know how far you've come if you cannot see the beginning?
Some people may not enjoy, may even despise it but this is a story that YOU crafted and I think you should be proud.
Looking forward to more!