the story has got me through multiple lunch breaks this week LOL very good story didn't think I'd be able to finish it but I did.

I was late for work, late getting back from lunch, up past my bedtime, and generally took over my life while l was reading this epic story. There were so many page turning moments that kept me from doing what I was supposed to be doing. This was excellent story telling from beginning to end. Thank you for writing and most importantly, uploading it.

OMG over 500k words but this was so much fun and I binged like a meth addict. At least something good came out of 2020. Cheers for a great fic!

took my time reading this story and i'm glad i did. it was wonderful! sesshoumaru was ooc in this and i was surprised to see him this way. kagome had another side to her too. it was written very well and the citrus wasn't bad either. this will be one of my faves and i hope to read more from you in the future. keep up the great writing. c'ya'

Your story sucks. Every time he starts actually doing good your make him go put his hand up another bitches dress. Im done. Dnf

Sesshomaru empezando su enamoramiendo es tan lindo
Me fastidia esas que se lo quieren saborear atrás perras, el solo es de Kagome
Jajaja sessh viviendo en carne propia la historia de miroku da mil años de vida no pare de reír

Surgieron muchas emociones con este Cap, buenísimo

I loved it. Couldn’t put it down. I feel like you captured the characters perfectly. Loved every moment of this story.

Me encantó, y me encanta que esta siendo cada vez más íntimo con kagome como el hecho de contarle algo solo a ella️Creo que esta bien que no describiera la tortura, la dejas a la imaginación

Esto fue una maravilla, No me separaba que ya sería el Beso de ellos( Aúnque si lo esperaba con ansias)
Escribes Espectacular! Justo ahora estoy amando este Fic ️

Susie,

Holy hell! What a story. I wrote a review on the DOKUGA site but had to find it here and write it again haha. Seriously this story should be sent to Takahashi.

This was an incredibly poignant and moving story. The sorrow underlying the heat was genuinely heartfelt and moving.

Sesshomaru’s arc felt so transformative. Not sure if it is the pandemic reflections and all but the idea of him existing in power and finally coming around to learn to actually live with fallibility was something so touching and easily relatable to. I felt something in that. Something honest, raw and touching.

I really connected with this story, you are a hell of a writer. The characters development, flaws, fights, lust to love was so well crafted and so incredibly built.

His struggle, her quiet shame at what she did. His becoming human and what that meant to the deeper levels of his demonic instincts, it was just so incredibly beautiful.

I really mean it. I do believe that you should send this story to Takahashi somehow.

She would be proud of what you did here.

Please try to self publish this as a book, saw Forthright did so with their story Imperceptible on Goodreads. As even though people may not know of Inuyasha I do believe with a prologue that this can be something that others can tap into. Your writing deserves to be read by larger audiences.

You handle character developments flawlessly and with flaw. That is such a natural skill and a hard won study in craft.

You had me up reading into the wee hours of the night. I am still recovering from my sleep deprived reading jaunts.

Well done. I cannot wait to let this sit and re-read again in the future. Look forward to reading your other works.

Also if you have not already, would love to hear your thoughts on another fan fiction piece - A mere Digression by Elle6778. A lot of heat but ultimately another interesting and authentic character arc for Sesshomaru and Kagome.

Not sure if you write stories in response to others but would love to see what you thought of that story and what you could possibly do in response or build upon this somehow.

I admit I was one of those who followed the Inuyasha (English) series and movies for those years when it aired and furthered by following the Sess x Kag fandom fan fiction that so well captured the enigmatic, mysterious and unfulfilled daiyoukai character and all the many possibilities and alternate storylines.

I stopped reading these incredible fanfic pieces for whatever reason for some years, guess time and life. But 2 months ago I heard about Yashahime and when I heard the fate they had in store for Sesshomaru (ending up with Rin, which to me we went against the entire character arc of Sesshomaru in the Inuyasha series), I immediately ran for comfort to Dokuga only to find an empty well. It seems this became a forgotten dessert and found myself in a strange way mourning. I re-read all the familiar stories I had favorited form years prior and then decided to read through the Dokuga awards winning pieces only to see it went to 2013 and no further.

Please continue to carry the torch for Sesshomaru and Kagome. Your work should be its own series.

oh my goodness this story took forever but I'd read it again I loved it so much!
they're just aren't enough long stories and this one has so much depth and character development!

Omg!

amo este fic, gracias!

I found this story interesting how everyone in the past viewed sex while kagome from the future was more shy towards it. Other stories i read is the other way around. And the way you wrote about humanity was a humble reminder that I sat and thought about. And when they finally had sex, it was kind of nice to see that the first time isn't always good or the way you think it's going to be. You wrote the realness of it which I think people who haven't yet should be reminded of. Great story.