Oh that was so funny. I had to stop reading to collect myself

This was a great story. I do feel like you dragged it for quite some time though. Waiting more than 500,000 words before they actually have sex for the first time does seem really unnecessary.

With that being said...The sex was hot, sexy, and sensual. A lemon at the end of the story would have been a nice touch too.

Nevermind. I’m glad she went with him. I hope she’s pregnant.

Wait...Kagome isn’t going with him? That kind of pisses me off

I liked it, it was cute. I just think some chapters could have been taken out. Like there was so much build up and then the ending dropped off. It was sweet how you put in the extra chapter though so we’d see what happened after years went by. Great job! The writing was amazing, easy to follow and there was no confusion.

Fantastic story with great characters, loved it!

Interesting start but disappointing end. Selfish trash wins. Twilight was a better love
Story than this

Kagome’s magical demon power giving vagina. Good story but That bat is always putting on conditions so she gets what she wantsdo you hate Sesshomaru so much to saddle him with this awful piece of future trash. She’s selfish and no one sees it “oh Sesshomaru I will stay by your side as long as you are human and if you become a demon we’re through but I love you” she’s a fraudulent little innit can’t stop manipulating Sesshomaru and being full of shit

Humans are parasites and need a Thanos solution... as a human there is nothing good about our species we ruin everything

No that reprehensible bat Kagome is just worthy of Hojo and nothing else. Oh I’m so sorry now do me. When you screw up you give people space and time not Kagome nope she just wants to continue being her selfish bratty self

When she says she’s on a break I really wish for Naraku to fly in and stab her in her dumb head... her wish is just one of those things for which forgiveness isn’t allowed. She’s dumb and childish great for Inuyasha but not for Sesshy he deserves class with sass while Kagome is a selfish brat. She ripped the mans identity and all that he is from him and she’s like oopsy sorry guys my bad. Like I would end with her being separated from everyone and Sesshomaru becoming a demon again cause once his foes find out he’s human he’s going to be dead sooner or later

Oh my God! Your depiction of Kagome’s awful selfishness is so perfect! She’s always making things about herself, she thinks sorry is her magic get out of jail free card and everyone should just bow down to the insecure one.

So Kagome’s selfishness got a little girl hurt and I bet she’s still going to get her magic happy ending

Selfish Kagome to the Max... I can never choose who I wish to put in a wood chipper more; Kagome or Orihime Inoue they both are so incredibly annoying (Inuyasha never had interesting females other than Sango. I only watched for Sesshy waiting for the moment he accepted Inuyasha as pack and they were a family but my beautiful Inu bro moments never happened)

Kagome is true to her selfish canon nature... bratty and annoying... I really hoped that she ended up maturing and staying in the future, marrying Hojo maybe and Inuyasha could be free from all things Kikyo related hopefully wandering with his brotherwould have been the best ending. Inu bros unite and Kagome goes away