great story

This story is an masterpiece this i'll tell you. Hope you continue it

Nicee

Nice extrapolation of this character!

Great story! ty for writing it!

Good chapter

Super!

The crossover I didn't know I wanted. Excellent job so far!

I was just thinking about this story! so awesome to see an update. I don't know much about the Dresden Files but your writing is very compelling and I'm exited to learn more about this world and see how Alexandria continues to interact with it

Hohoho, this was epic

BLOOD FOR THE BLOOD GOD!

loved the chapter

All right, time for proper Russian.
"Определить"
It's identify, but in the meaning identify something. You are looking for "Назовись". And if you are looking for Russian reaction by military guideline, it should be "Стой! Кто идет?!"
"Какого?"
It is a question about color in this context. If he is confused about whole organization, you are looking for "Кого?"
"Английский?"
It is language, not ethnic. If she is asking about citizenship, you are looking for "Англичанка?"
"Американец?"
Russian language is gendered. You are looking for "Американка?"
"Не трогайте костры"
It's don't touch (with hand) open fire places. You are looking for "Не касайтесь жаровень".

What year is it in your story? "Federalnaya sluzhba kontrrazvedki" existed from 1993 to 1995. And here is a twist - Russia had a civil war in Chechnya at that time. There were no Chechens in army or in special services.

I was happy to see this chapter, thought the story was dead for a while

So nice to see another chapter, thank you, you made my day. It's nice to see Alexandria rolling with the punches and at least acknowledging the reality or magic in that world.