Your second task malfunction was done well. The committee still can not plan.

Very enjoyable stomp on Ministry after Governors keep Lobos from the Ball.

First time I have seen a horcrux termination at POA dementors attack. Very good. Dumbles knows he is an educated idiot.

First story I have seen Draco in the tournament. Funny thing the name Potter got changed.

WARNING: Not complete story has been abandoned even if author wont say it. Dont read if you want a complete story author has many other great complete stories just not this one.

This is a great story. Love all the twists and turns. And the way that you’re writing all of the characters. I love the idea of the wolves, the way that you’ve written them in the story. Would love to see more.

As well as a watning n the summary houpd be given that a lot of unnecessary, stupid, waste of words, unneeded, lame, boring and did i mention stupid because could say that word gor many of the young cildrens death. this isnt even able to b an m rating with how sick it is on how any children die stupidly nd seriously should have every single child death on the story just removed, maybe then thestory wouldnt be ST for sick and twisted.

I got to this point and honestly just gana tap out. reading the summaand thwn the story is like reading two completely different thinga and with the semi long chapters, hints should have been given by know about the summary but there isny anf yhere is so much useless uterly garabe extra drama isnt ust made it a boring story. If you like drama and rambaling without really getting much done and just excess words that dont really have much n w story and a lot of long qinded drawing out of things not needed, this is the story for you. If you read the summar and think its a good ideaim aorry but you will be bored and disappointed.

If you are not going to write Night of the Moon bring back the four chapters that you took so that this feels finished in some way! You have left us hanging for far too long in my personal opinion. I hate when someone claims there going to do something to finish a story and they fail to do exactly what it is that they are claiming!

Thanks for another great read! Very Nicely done, and an interesting and unique take on the Weres. The world-building in your many stories is outstanding. A lot of folks only have one story, which they write over and over again with minor variations. Kudos on avoiding that trap, at least in all the stuff of your I have binged on to date.

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Such a great story. I hope you find the muse to write Part II!

i utterly despise adults in nearly every hp ff i have ever read they should all put their wands in their mouths and cast reductors

I’ll be blunt: normally Draco and Pansy are characters that dear to get smacked down for the shit they pulled in canon. This story….damn, you’ve made a variant of them that I’m routing for. Not since Bobmin’s Sunset/Sunrise over Britain series have I found a Draco that is relatable, true-ish to canon AND believable. Good show

Now I’m happy to say that the way you’re describing the clusterfuck that the Lobos are putting up with has remained constant AND somehow understandable (if one is to tilt their brain carrier just right) while not having a deux ex machina pop out of nowhere to solve everything.

Now for the reason I’m commenting NOW instead of the end of the posted material; the cliffie you have here….masterpiece of hope, dread and humor all rolled up into a nice slice of life for the Malfoy line. (I truly hope you have a roundabout way for Lucius to get news of Pansy’s bun in the oven. His reaction would be something to see.)
And the fact that you did the reveal in a manner that shows character development for Draco…wow. The fact that he knows his wife’s cycle AND is considerate about it shows him becoming a good(ish) person. He might still be a bigot, but he does show the potential to grow.

Hhr’s growth as characters…the thought of what Hr will likely do to Igor…Bellatrix will likely show some respect for that. And awe if there is time, most likely.

Voldemort and Dumbassadoor being lovers….as a former teacher, that was massively “puke-town” territory. Did show how far V was willing to go to get his goals and how trusting D was/still is. But talk about puke-inducing stuff.

I look forward to the next few chapters and hope the ending is as good as the rest. (Whenever that ending comes along)

again I'm so glad I found this story again.. not much I can say besides you have a brilliant mind. any editorial issues are easily passed by and understood. the story flows well to the point I didn't even realize that I passed to the next chapter. AMAZING!