Reviews for Effecting Fate |
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![]() ![]() ![]() AWWWW, the reunion between Arturia and Shirou was so sweeet, love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hope you update |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was a total blast! I can't wait for the next chapter, and the eventual reveal of Artoria! (Actually i can, please take your time. A short, but good story is way better than a few hundred thousand words of trash) I can tell just how much your writing has improved over the course of this story and wish you the best of luck in the future PS: Thanks for the Author's note at the end. I hate it when i don't know if a story is going slowly/on hiatus or discontinued. |
![]() ![]() I hope you update again soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() PEAAAAAK |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this story, I hope you do keep writing it. I don't have much else to say other than really hoping Artoria gets a sword. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope the update will be more frequently. I like the story you made |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is mad fire. Looking forward to more chapters! |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice chapter look forward the next ones |
![]() ![]() ![]() u know shirou being bad with guns is directly contradictory to cannon right? he's good with guns and uses them a lot. for some reason cuz he uses a bow almost all fanfic authors decided he was bad with guns |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just noticed that this story got an update. Great chapter, and it’s awesome to see the story move forward! Thanks for writing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Of all the things to randomly stumble over when trying to find a FGO/Fallout NV crossover I certingly wasn't expecting to find that one of my favorite Fate fics had updated! Glad to have you back! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Heh. Well, that's one way to get a fight started. Though I wonder if Wrex might have unintentionally helped the Turian general by getting him to start a fight. On one hand, the fight could get the general's blood pumping and make him remember who he is rather than what he has been acting like recently. On the other hand, when C-Sec arrests everyone at the bar, then the Turian general and Shirou might either share a cell or be close enough for a conversation. Shirou might be able to share some wisdom that gets the Turian general to think about his recent behavior. Honestly, I think the latter might be better if the Consort decides to send out a thank you to the person responsible for getting the Turian general to act like himself again. Though I suppose a thank you directed to Wrex might be amusing too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahhhhhh. I really like this and I hope it updates soon. So close to spectre and leaving the citadel. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I see arturia has done some growing. I wonder if she has the proportions of her lancer self... |