Just realized in my second read through that percy’s response to Iaxis is just Evan Kelmps duel speech from D20 and i love it

I’m hoping beyond hope that you didn’t just make Jason Superman. He and Percy have always been on near equal fighting terms so making him damn near invincible would pretty much butcher that dynamic.

I’m confused, didn’t Triton and Chiron just have a conversation about not having more Atlanteans show up. To make people think he was the only one? Why right after that talk is Artemis joining him?

I wish instead of just changing names the author came up with new ideas. For example just making Zeus the same subspecies of human as Poseidon doesn’t make much sense. I mean you introduced Jason with his ability to fly so it would make far more sense to have him as a subspecies that lived on rose to the peaks of mountains or even lived on top of floating islands hidden by magic. Weaker physically than Atlanteans due to evolving in different conditions but allowing them other abilities such as flight or even aerokenisis. For Hades kin you could’ve made them a subspecies that evolved in caves and mountain crevices. And of course all these powers can come from the three symbols of power. The Trident is already in it so the others wouldn’t cause a problem except for adding more variables. And I semi dislike the throwing away of actual Greek mythology, if you plan on using the amazons or the gods now you’ll have to write around them. Cause now Perseus was not the son of a god. Just the brother of a king. Negating all of the stories and the Happy ending Sally named him for. Now if you wanted to combine Perseus with Atlantis then you could’ve just said that he was a friend and honored guest of the Atlanteans during his time on Earth. So in conclusion I dislike that you’ve made Zeus, the king of the skies and gods. A mere extension of Poseidons domain

This is a damn good story I hope that you will come back and finish it. I really like the way that you have moved the people around in their love lives, personal life's and friendships. You made this a must read story for Persey fans. Please come back and finish it. Also I want to Thank You for taking time out of your life to write this story. Keep up the good work.

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HellsRanger59

As soon as I read ATLANTIS I thought about Arthur Curry. Your end note made me realize I was not imagining things.

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Incredible story so far! I REALLY hope that you continue it sometime soon!

update . I love the story I've been waiting for so long

Hmm is this getting updated? or are you still writing that new story- Interbellum was it?

Theory to add on to my last comment after reading the one before it: If the metallic object inside the meteor is Thalia, it's possible that someone else might get their hands on her first. Maybe she'll be manipulated to be an enemy of our heroes?

Will Thalia be in this story? Like how Superman has his cousin Supergirl, maybe Thalia also survived?

So there’s no Thalia yet, but when Jason was punching asteroids there was a weird one that looked metallic, intro for Thalia as a supergirl esk character?

"Was the meeting today? I thought it wasn't for another month." "That would be next month's meeting, Percy," LMAO I was dying when I read that

Is this a Dimension 20 reference nice